OS One Wish

ONE WISH

 

 

one wish that is only a wish,

in life i can only wish,

i know it will be only a wish

one wish to make u mine

that is going to be a wish….

like a child to the dark sky

i made a wish that only is mine

i know its so selfish

but that could never be my in life time….

he was too close to touch

yet so far that could be my match…

it was destiny to meet

but just to remind i m alone in farthest life

u were only mine,,, that the reason

i could survive….

poem by me……………

 

its sunday, whatttttt is sunday, wo ghar pe rahega,, kyun babaji ye sunday kyun aata hain? main unse nahi mil payungiii… i hate u babaji….nahi main us ke ghar pe jaake milungi ha i love u babaji………..

 

ohh sorry i forgot to introduce myself, hii i m Geet handa,, naam to suna hoga, janti hu thakela diolouge tha, but hey lets go i’ll give u the intro of my family but in short ha,,,,

 

geet’s mom: geet putaar, aaja nashta karle, maine alloo k parathe banaye hain….

that is my mom… mrs Rano handa, like every mom she is a sweetheart and wanted me to get married as soon as possible,

geet: mamma aap mujhe mote karne pe kyun tule huye ho, jante ho na aalo k parathe mere fav hain aur ek se mera kaam nahi chalta main 3 4 kha leti hu, aur fir aap hi kahoge moti hogayi to munde nahi milenge shaadi k layak…..

 

geet’s brother: iska matlab tu shaadi k liye taiyar hain?

 

ohh its my elder bro brij handa, the hier of handa industry and an apple of every one’s eyes but love me the most in the life,,,

geet: ohh bhai how i wish,, aapko aur maa ko har waqt mere shaadi ki fikar kyun hain? i m independent i can survive alone too, aur itni jaldi kya hain shaadi ki,,,

geet’s sister in law: 25 saal ki hogayi hain, abb to shaadi karle, mom ko v shanti mil jayegi aur hume teri fikar v nahi hogi….

 

geet: bhabhi main kya aap pe bojh ban gayi hu? jo har roj meri shaadi ki baat chalate ho. agar main aap sabko itna pareshan karti hu to chali jayungi yaha se,

 

brij got excited : to baat chalayu main kahi pe, mera ek dost hain bohot accha insan hain aur tujhe pasand v karta hain…

geet with fake tears: itna khatak ti hu kya main aap sabki nazar me, thik hain main chali jayungi, company mujhe flat to jarur dega main apna saman waha shift kar lungi aur aap sabki zindegi se dur chali jayungi, fir apko meri fikar v nahi hogi…. she was sobbing and to see this her bhabi pammi got emotional,,

 

pammi: nahi nahi geet humne kab aisa kaha… baccha hume sirf teri fikar rehti hain bas…. tujhe kaisa laga k tu humpe bojh hain….. waise v tu meri choti bahen ki tarha hain aur ye parivaar hi to mera sab kuch hain warna main to ek anath,,,,,,,,,,, but geet didn’t let her complete…

 

geet: bhabhi plss aisa mat kaho, aur aap sab chahte ho main is ghar se jayu to main company ki flat me v to ja sakti hu na akhir CEO jo hu, main alag aparment afford kar sakti hu..

pammi: chup.. aur koi baat nahi kahegi tu, aaj se koi tujhe kahi jaane k liye nahi kahega, teri jo marzi tu wahi karegi, shaadi nahi karni to mat kar, koi jaldi nahi hain….

brij: ye tum kya keh rahi ho?

paami: maine kaha na, koi kuch nahi kahega geet se, she was staring at brij dangerously,, to which brij nervously smiled….

pammi: tu baith geet main tere liye aur kuch bana deti hu, kya kahana hain tujhe,

geet: kuch nahi bhabhi, main breakfast uss ghar me karungi aaj….bye maa, bye bhai while she was giving a winning smirk to brij and wink at her father who coming downstair to accompany his family…..

geet leave to her “uss ghar”

while brij was fuming…………

brij: fir se ullu bana gayi tumhe wo, pammi tum geet ko kabhi nahi samajh payogi, ye sab uska drama tha aur wo janti hain tumhe bebkhoof banaana asaan hain… naahi wo kahi jayegi aur naahi shaadi karegi uff main kya karu meri sidhi saadhi biwi ka…

mr handa: hahahaha, ajeeb family hain meri… while geet’s mom gave a look. SHUT UP OR I WILL,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 

hahaha that was my bhabhi, sweet and naive and i know brij bhai ko aur maa ko shaadi k draame se bhaabhi hi bacha sakkti hain…. brij bhai saari duniya ko darate hain lekin bhabhi se darte hain, how sweet na? but wo dust danav bilkul sweet nahi hain, bilkul nim chara karela hain yucckk…..

geet enter khurana mansion…..

dev and vicky: hii geet, aaja hum teri hi wait kar rahe the, breakfast karle….. cheese omlet and pasta bana hain….

ye hain mere sabse acche frnds dev n vicky, twins hain but not look-a-like at all….. hum colg se frnds bane. ek class me hone ka kuch to faida huya……

geet: pasta, uff ye kitna pasta khayega yaar, har roz pasta, muh ka taste nahi bigadta? main v kiske baare me bol rahi hu usse taste waste ka kya pata, uska favorate khana to hum log hain jisse wo gusse ki aag me jalake khata hain……

daadi: geet bete aap bohot pyari pyari baate karti hain,, aap roz yaha aaya kare….

everyone was loughing their head off…

geet: main to ajau lekin fir office k log kahi rehne k kabil na rahe, gusse me pak jayenge us das sar wale ravan k gusse me hahaha……

vicky whisper to geet: aaj to bro tumhe kaccha kha jayenge

 

geet: kyun? aaj kya special occasion hain jo wo rakshash mujhe khayega, aur waise v tera bhai hain kaha, mujhe to nazar nahi araha..

 

TUMHE NAZAR IS LIYE NAHI ARAHA KYUN WO RAKSHASH TUMHARE PICHE KHARA HAIN…………

 

here came a deep voice…

 

uff ye ravan kaha se v kahi se v asakta hain……… hmm but banda lag to raha hain HOT…. oh abb isska kya intro du………. MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA,,, hier of khurana company, youngest billanior in the world, but ek no ka kharus,,, gussa to naak pe rehta hain… mere bechare dosto ka badha bhai….. aur dadima ka ladla pota…… IN SHORT MERA BEST FRIEND………………………

 

 

shock hogaye na?? ha ye karela mera best frnd hain, kahani lambi hain but short me bolu to i was lil chubby in my childhood when i was 8 yrs,,, some boys were bullying me and maan came there, and broke the noses of some boys.he was older than me by 4yrs but hum dost ban gaye………. tab se hum dost hain, aise waise nahi best frnd…..

maan: ha to teddy yaha kar kar rahi hain apne big mouth k sath?

ok, tabse duniya me mujhe agar koi bully kar sakta hain to wo sirf maan hain, jaise usne iska theka liya hain…. aur kisiki himmat nahi mujhse aise baat karne ka lekin ye dust danav khud bully karne ka degree liya huya hain……….

geet: maan main abb teddy nahi hu….to mujhe ye naam se bulana chod do…..

 

maan: bilkul ho, pehle white cute teddy thi lekin abb sirf teddy banke reh gayi ho, apne aapko dekha hain kabhi seeshe me.. kitni moti aur kaali hogayi ho…………

 

geet: hawwww, main nahi tum dekho jaake sheese me. bandar lag rahe ho……. muscle wala bandar……. pasta khake v karela jaise ho, wo bhi neem chara…… main to din raat pray karti hu jis ladki se tumhari shaadi hogi usse babaji thodi patience de taake wo tumhe jhel sake…

maan: sukar karo kamse kam meri shaadi to hogi tumhari kismat me to shaadi v hain ya nahi pata nahi…. buddhi hogayi ho kon karega tumse shaadi……

 

geet: tumse to accha hi hoga……..

 

maan: huh let see,,

geet: u’ll see……..

 

that was a never ending fight of geet n maan….. they r best frnd and only they can behave like this to each other… dusre kare to unki shamat aani hain……………

dev vicky and daadi was used to see this fight every day,, so they just kept their mouth shut and head bow….. so they can giggle silently….

maaneet gave a look to them that was enough for them tp shut up……

daadi: geet bete aaj itni jaldi yaha pe? aaj to office v nahi hain

geet: issi liye to aayi hu daadi..

everyone looked at her astonished…..

geet: aare aap sab aise kyun dekh rahe ho, main nahi asakti kya, wo in gadho k sath shopping pe jana hain…

dev n vicky exchange thire look

GADHE? SHOPPING?

geet: hmm shopping , next week kuch khaas hain tum logo ko pata hain na so i was thinking,,,,,,,

dev: khas? kya hain us din?

vicky: geet next week kya hain?

ok now this is enough ye log mera birth day vul gaye…

geet: tum log vul gaye? maan tumhe to yaad hain na next week kya hain?

maan: ha geet main kaise vul sakta hu, next week wo important client k sath meeting hain, wo canada wale, hain na?

geet made baby face: aap sab vul gaaye?

daadi: bete aap batayiye to sahi hum vule kya hain? she knewit very well geet would never say this……..

geet: kuch nahi… kuch nahi hain…….. she gets up to leave..

dev: lekin shopping….

geet: koi jarurat nahi hain shopping ki………..

but bumped to someone…………

hey geet aram se,,,,

geet: ohhh shefali, sorry, maine dekha nahi..

shefali: wo to thik hain lekin tum aise gusse me kyun ja rahi ho?

geet: gussa? kaha hain , mere chehre pe tumhe gussa dikh raha hain? main to kitni khus hu…

shefali: to itna chilla kyun rahi ho?

geet calmed herself: phewww, kuch nahi shefali, andar maan must be waiting for u..

shefali: main acchi to lag rahi hu na?

she was wearing a white floral dress that was reaching her knee.

geet: perfect…. aur waise v maan tumpe fida hain. wo kaha insab pe nazar dega….

shefali: wo to hain, ok bye………..

geet: bye………….

ok this was shefali,, maan’s going to be fiance,,collage mate and soon to be life partner……m i sounding low? noooooooo that can’t be, hmm but mere frnds meri birthday vul gaye…….

geet was back to her house but was really upset……

pammi knocked at her door….

geet: kon hain? pls mujhe abhi kisise koi baat nahi karni…

pammi: mujhse v nahi?

geet: oh bhabhi, aap? aayo na,

pammi: kya baat hain geet, tu itni upset kyun hain…subha to badhi khus thi. usse mili nahi kya….

geet: mili bhabhi aur shefali se v……….

pammi: to iss baat pe muh latkayi huyi hain? tujhe wo pasand hain na?

geet: nahi bhabhi aisi baat nahi hain, maan to bas mera dost hain…

pammi: lekin maine to uska naam nahi liya, ye wo to koi v hosakta tha, she said with a smirk….

geet: bhabhiiiiiiiiiiii…………

pammi treat geet as a sister but they r really good frnds, pammi knew geet’s every lil secret…..

pammi: tu mujhse kuch nahi chupa sakti geet: tu maan ko bata kyun nahi deti?

geet:nahi bhabhi aisi koi baat nahi hain, main upset hu kyun k sab mere birthday vul gaye,

pammi: maan v?

geet: hmm…

pammi: to iss baat itni badi muh?

geet: sabke sath man v bhool gaya, wo to mera bes frnd hain na….

pammi: geet sach bata sabteri birth day vul gaye is baat pe dukh hain ya maan vul gaya is baat pe?

paami: tu usse pyar karti hain ye bol kyun nahi deti usse………..

geet: kaise bolu bhabhi,, wp shefali se bohot pyar karta hain, aur shefali v… aur main apne best frnd ko khush dekhna chahti hu…..

pammi: geet wo tere sath jyada khus rahega…………

geet: aisa nahi hosakta bhabhi, hum sirf acche dost hi thik hain…..

pammi didn’t fetch the convo as she knew geet will be broken then when she herselg will know how much she love maan…..

 

 

it was 3days they didn’t met… man called geet

maan: kaha ho tum? office kyun nahi arahi ho?

geet: meri tabiyat thik nahi hain, aur main leave application diya hain,, tumne hi to sign kiya tha….

maan: but itne din hogaye, ek phn v naahi kiya..

geet: tum bhi to kar sakte the na,,,,

ther was some noise behind maan which was shefali’s: chalo na jaan mujhe shopping pe jana hain, aur mera new show aane waala hain, ye show trp ko hila dega,,,

ok she is talking about her tv news show, that she is hosting…

geet: maan tum jao…. main thik hu jab puri tarha thik hojayungi to office ajayungi…….

she hung up……….

geet was continuously blabbering to herself: jaan huh…. trp badega…. kapre to pahenti nahi hain aur naye kapre chahiye,, uff kita kharcha karati hain mere maan ka… did i say MERE MAAN,, hey babaji ye kya horaha hain mujhe,, control geet control…..

after 3days…………..

Vicky came to geet in the mean time……..

vicky: geet mujhe kuch baat karni hain tuhse,,

geet: ha bol kya hain…

vicky: geet shefali acchi nahi hain…

geet; kya? ye kya bol raha hain tu?

vicky:geet maine pata lagaya, actually mujhe shaq horaha tha shefaali pe to maine detective hire kiya tha , geet shefaali ka boyfrnd hain pehle se hi.. wo bhai ko dhoka de rahi hain….. wo unke sath is liye hain take unse paise le sake aur show k liye fame as u know he is so populer…….

geet was looking at vicky like he have two head……

vicky: tu sun rahi hain main kya keh raha hu?

geet: ha main sun rahi hu… lekin hum kya kar sakte hain vicky..

vicky: geet ye bhai ki life ki baat hain….. kuch karna padega hume. bhai ko sacchai se wakeeb karna padega… do something geet…

geet: ok vicky, main kuch karti hu, tu shefali pe nazar rakh, ok..

vicky; ok

geet reach khurana company where she is CEO of the company………she goes to maan’s cabin….

geet: maan mujhe tumse baat karni hain……

maan: geet tumhari to tabiyat kharab hain na? to yaha aise?

geet: maan mujhe tumse shefali k baare me baat karni hain…

maan: shefali k baare me? kya baat hain geet, itni pareshan kyun lag rahi ho………

geet: umm maan wo shefali thik nahi hain, i mean wo tumhare liye thik nahi hain…….

shefali came from the bathroom of the office: main kyun thik nahi hu maan k liye geet?

geet: tum yaha? tum kya kar rahi ho shefali… tumhe kuch kaam nahi hota na, hamesha yaha padhi rehti ho,,,

maan: geet ye sab kya bol rahi ho kuch pata bhi hain tumhe? shefali k baare me anab sanab kyun bol rahe ho aur usse aise baate kyun kar rahe ho?

geet: maan tumhe nahi pata ye acchi ladki nahi hain,

maan: GEETTTTTTT

shefali: dekha maan main keh rahi thi na geet mujhe pasand nahi karti…..

maan: geet tum abhi yaha se jao plsss.

geet: maan tum,,

maan: plss

geet goes from there….

 

 

shefali met with geet outside the office,

shefali: kya laga tha tumhe geet, tum kuch v bologi aur wo maan lega tumhari baat? main tumhe kehti hu ha main maan se pyar nahi karti bas uske paise n status se pyar karti hu,, kya karlogi tum……….

 

geet slapped her…

 

geet: main maan ki zindegi barbad nahi hone dungi, uske samne sacchai laake rahungi,, aur tumhari asli face uske samne laungi…..

geet turn to to her car,, when she was opening the door shefali got a call….

shefali: yes darling, ha main thik hu, ha maan ko kuch nahi pata chala, accha huya tumne vicky ko hamari baate sunte dekh liya tha,, nahi maan ko mujh pe shaq nahi huya, yes baby ha hum raat ko mil rahe hain,,, xyz multiplex me,,

geet reach home and called vicky,,,

geet: vicky shefali aaj xyz jaane wali hain aur us ladke k sath milne wali hain,, plss tum maan ko leke waha ajana………

vicky: ok geet main ajaunga 9pm sharp….

 

 

 

9pm………

maan n vicky enter the complex…….

maan: vicky tum mujhe yaha kyun laaye ho?

vicky: bro main ek frnd k liye yaha aaya hu, aap chalo to sahi……

 

they enetr the restrurent where geet was waiting for them,,,,,

they took the seat beside her….

maan: geet tum yaha? oh to wo frnd ye hain vicky?

geet: maan mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hain,,, wo dekho tumhare piche…….

 

shefali was there with a guy… having dinner………. maan vicky and geet went to shefali’s table….. shefali was shocked to see maan over there……

 

maan: shefali yaha kya kar rahi ho? tumhari shopping hogayi?

 

shefali: maan isse milo raj, my chilhood frnd, i said earlier, he was with me.. aur shopping bohot acche se huyi lekin tum yaha ky kar rahe ho?

maan: vicky mujhe yaha laya tha leikn usne kaha kisi frnd se milane larha hain but yaha geet thi……

 

shefali: i told u na, geet mujhe tumse dur karke hi chain legi…….. kyun geet tum aisa kyun kar rahi ho?

 

geet: shefali abb jhoot bolna chor do. kitna jhoot bologi. sar jayegi tumhari zuban……. aur ye ladka tumhara bf hain na? abb kya huya maan ko batau?

 

shefali: geettt,,,, wo sirf mera accha dost hain,lekin mujhe pata hain tum aisa kyun kar rahi ho, tum maan se pyar karti ho, aur issi liye hum dono ko ek sath nahi dekh sakti………maan main to yaha raj k sath plan kar rahi thi k tumhe kaise propose, i wanted to make something special, i wanted to propose u…. b ut geet tumhe ye nahi sahen horaha tha…….

maan was listening all this atlast,,

maan: bass shefali…… he hold geet’s hand and drag her out and after that make her sit in the car and drove away…. maan stopped the car in the midway where no one can see them…. they got out from the car…

maan: ye sab kya tha geet? what was that? tum shefali k baare aise baate kyun kar rahi thi?

geet: maan believe me wo natak kar rahi hain, wo uska bf hain, aur wo tumse pyar nahi karti……

maan: ufff geet, ek hi baat kabse kahi ja rahi ho….. kaise tumhe samjhayu k koi galat faimy huyi hain tumhe…..

geet: mujhe koi galat faimy nahi huyi hain maan, samjho baat ko , wo waise pakri gayi issi liye bahane bana rahi thi…….. wo acchi ladki nahi hain, sirf paiso ke liye tumhare sath hain, us jaise chipkali ko main acche se janti hu,, she don’t deserve u……

 

maan: GEETTTTT,, bas aur kitna jhoot bologi, sach kyun nahi kehti k tum mujhse pyar karti ho is liye ye sab natak kar rahi ho…. maine kabhi nahi socha tha geet tum aise niklogi….. apne swarth k liye tum shefali ko badnaam kar rahi ho…… for ur kind information wo mujhse keh ke uss ladke k sath gayi thi…. geet maine kabhi nahi socha tha meri best frnd kabhi mere sath aisa karegi,, tum apne aap ko meri frnd kehti ho lekin mujhse mere pyar ko juda karna chahti ho sirf apne swarth k liye………

 

geet: maine aisa kya kiya hain maan? she asked innocently…… ha ye sach hain k main tumse pyar karti hu, lekin kya tumse pyar karna gunah hogaya? tumhari salahmati chahna, tumhe koi dukh na pouchahye iska kheyal rakhna gunah hogaya? kya tumhari khusi chahna selfishness hogayi? then i m really sorry maan… sorry she said while sobbing,, maan wanted to console her but there was a car passing them….

car owner: geet? tum yaha kya kar rahi ho..

geet: bhai? she cleaned her tears and said wo main maan k sath ghar wapis arahi thi bas mujhe yaha utarna tha, aap jante ho na meri mood ko…. accha mujhe ghar lechaloge?

brij: ha baith ja car me…..

they zoomed off……

morning…………

its geet’s birthday…………….

maan called her as her phn wa switched off in the night and so was in the morning.. so he called at her landline… pammi took it…..

maan: hello geet?

pammi: maan main pammi. geet to subah nikal gayi airport…….

maan: airport?

pammi: tumhe nahi pata? wo london ja rahi hain….. hume subha jaane se pehle hi boli….. brij k sath ja rahi hain, keh rahi thi, wo handa industry london brance join kar rahi hain……

maan was shocked to here this……… he just take his car and goes in full speed to the airport..

geet cleared all the imigration n all, but there was an announcement..

GEET,, KAHA HO TUM,, PLSS COME BACK TO ME………….. PLSS DON’T LEAVE ME LIKE THIS… I’LL BE SHATTERED WITHOUT U……… I KNOW I HURT U BUT BELIEVE ME, I DIDN’T DO THAT INTENSIONALY.. MAINE KABHI TUMHE DUKH DENA NAHI CHAHA, INFACT JAB V TUM ROTI HO TAB MUJHE AISA LAGTA HAIN K MERE ANDAR KA KOI HISSA MUJHSE KAT RAHA HAIN….. I KNOW I M JERK, TUMHE HAMESHA PARESHAN KARTA HU LEKIN YAKEEN MANO YE LAST THA, ISKE BAAD KABHI TUMHE DUKH NAHI DUNGA… U R THE MOST BEATIFULL GIRL I EVER MET IN MY LIFE. UR CARE UR CUTENESS, MADE ME SELFISH… MAIN TUHARE MUH SE TUMHARE PYAR KO ACCEPT KARWANA CHAHTA THA LEKIN TUMHE HI KHO RAHA THA….. PLSS GEET MUJHE CHODKE MAT JAO… I CAN’T SURVIVE WITHOUT U..

I LOVE YOU GEET……………..

 

geet was having tears in her eyes, she knew this voice this is her maan, yes HER MAAN…. geet saw maan was standing right infront of her, she ran and hugged him tight…………

 

 

in khurana mansion everyone gather there shefali too………..

geet: ye sab kya tha maan?

maan: plan…………..

geet looked at him with the big hazal eyes innocently…………

maan: ye sab plan tha geet, hum tumhe surprise dena chahte the tumhari birthday pe…… yaad hain us din tum aayi thi shopping k liye aur kisiko tumhari birthday yaad nahi tha…. wo hamara plan tha… geet ye sach hain k shefali and me were together but it was shefali who realize me that i don’t love her, i only love u……. but wo ye bhi janti thi k tum kisi aur ka pyar apna nahi banayogi,, so we all made this plan taake tum khud apne muh se apna pyar kubul kar sako…aur us din maine wo sab is liye kaha tha q k mujhe pata chal gaya tha tum khurana company chodke london handa industry join karna chahti ho,, tumhe koi haq nahi tha geet tum apne swarth k liye mujhse mera pyar meri geet ko dur kardo….. main aisa nahi hone deta geet but wo baate tumhe maine shefali k nahi tumhare liye kaha tha…..

shefali: geet tum dono pagal the, ek dusre se itna pyar karte ho lekin khud nahi samajh paaye,, geet maine tum dono ki ankho me dekha hain ek dusre k liye pyar………jab v tum kisi ladke se baat v karti thi maine wo aag maan k ankho me dekhi hain jo mujhe apne liye kabhi nazar nahi aayi, aur tumhare ankho me wo jealousy dekhi hain jab maan mere sath hota tha…. aur ye plan to kamiyab hona hi tha… pyar jo itna majbut tha tum dono ka… ha isme tumhari bhabhi ne hamari madad ki…..

pammi: geet maine teri dairy padh li thi jaha tune apni birthday wish likhi thi……….aur maan ko de diya……

maan read it loud……...

 

 

 

jaha mera suna tera bina sayiaan,

meri ye khawish banu teri piya…

sajna saware banne chali khoke ye meri jeeya

abb umro na kaate meri sayiyaan tere bina..

dost hu teri kya ban paungi sajni

khwaish ye puri ho mangu rab se dua….

tu rahe hamesha mere sath

lekin khusi rahe sirf tere sath

taqleef manjur mujhe tere naam

pyar hain mujhe tujhse karu sirf rab k naam….

 

aur ek hain……

 

 

one wish make a day for u

one wish make the night for u.

one wish love u forever

one wish to make u mine forever…

i wish this life could give me one chance

to live and love only you

never wanted anything before u

one wish that i could give the life to u

to be with u to be in ur arm

forever and ever

one wish just made this wish not only just a wish………………………………………..

 

 

 

 

 

HAPPY BIRHTHDAY GEET.. AND I TRULY LOVE U…………

I LOVE U TOO MAAN…………..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SAPNE BHI SACH HOTE HAIN…………AND WISHES V, IF UR WISH HAS REALY WISH TO BE FULFILLED………….

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  1. Posted by life19 on April 28, 2013 at 5:23 pm

    simply superb dear

    simple and sweet love

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  2. Beautiful os…
    Love it…

    Reply

  3. Aww Such Beautiful wish…..Lovely OS Tich
    Loved it so much

    Reply

  4. Posted by mishagoel on April 29, 2013 at 2:15 am

    fab os dr
    just loved it
    simple nd sober os

    Reply

  5. cute chhoti si love story

    Reply

  6. Posted by nonabebu47 on April 29, 2013 at 3:56 am

    nice simply awsum

    Reply

  7. tich it was awesome. very very beautiful love story of maneet. plan was really great.

    Reply

  8. Posted by spvd on April 29, 2013 at 10:26 am

    lovely dear………..

    PS – will u post this on IF?

    Deepa (spvd)

    Reply

  9. Lovely os. Finally both Geet n Maan express their love.

    Reply

  10. awesome

    Reply

  11. Posted by khwaishfan on May 1, 2013 at 7:00 pm

    lovely OS !well written 🙂

    Reply

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