Kaise Kahen (part 9)

 

After long time I m updating my stories,, sorry for late, I had met with an accident,, a car jut hit me without my knowledge LOL… yeah but that was not so big,, I fell on the ground with the light push and cut my hand and ankle got twisted…

But now I m fine a little os can update my stories… but I m hell busy with study so update can be alternate,, 1 in 2 day….

Thanks a lot guys for all the lovely comments and likes sorry I couldn’t reply any of u but will try next time, my study n updates are load and I m over due on it….

 

Disclaimer: the scene and place are true but I m just using it as my plot but they are not belongs to be here, it’s a famous place so maybe lots of people will recognize the place’  if I hurt anyone’s feeling then extremely sorry, I never intended that’

 

 

Part 9

 

Its the next night,, veer is improving and the injury is not so deep still the effect is huge.. everyone was in the hall, they were discussing something when the chief security enters…

Geet: what is the matter Shanker?

Shankar: wo mam…. Just then Veer enter the hall, everyone got concern…

Geet: what the hell u r doing here… veer glared her and she looked away, his eyes were warning her and she knew she have to correct her language,, she was getting frustrated every moment… she took a deep breath… Shankar wanted to tell something…

Shankar: mam,, again he got a deadly glare from Veer… sorry hukum… he turn to geet,,, Hukum they have called u all to their party at tomorrow…  (there is custom to say hokum to the prince princess family member)

Geet looked at him confuse: the party is after 2 days…

Veer settle himself beside Geet…

Shankar: this party is for his brother in law’s reception… geet’s face became hard, her eyes were red in anger.. veer squeeze her hand but she just looked down…

Veer: tell them we will come… geet insantly looked at him with fire flaming but veer silently assured her…

Unnati: dada your health is not so good and u…

Dev: I guess she is right why don’t u rest as u have to attend the party of yours also…

Veer: guys we have to attend this party, its important…

Maan: what can be more important than your health? He was silent all the while but was observing their silent talk, the way he squeeze her hand it was burning him inside to see other man touching HIS geet…

Rohan: veer if u want we can go to the party behalf of u,, u take rest buddy..

Aadi: I can stay with him, if anything needed we will call u all…

Sonam found it really good opportunity..

Sonam: yeah we all be there,, geet will be safe and maan bhai is also there, u know my bhai is expert in protecting people,, everyone chuckle n laughed on her, she made a cute face but geet was staring at maan only who himself was lost in her eyes,, they were remembering the day of that incident…

 

Flashback

 

Geet and maan was in relation then more than 2 month,, it was a day all decided to watch a movie… the movie was good,, anannya was there with them, she was burning to see maaneet together walking hand in hand… geet was giggling with sonam who was beside them… where ananya was on maan side… aadi n dev was in front of them…

Ananya tripped over the road and maan immediately broke their hand lock,, he held ananya before she can hit the road… geet saw them in concern but sonam was not liking it, she went towards their side to see what happen… ananya screamed that her ankle got twist and everyone saw a small amount of blood on her left foot side way… maan shouted for water first…

Geet looked here and there and saw a dabha was there, she ran to grab a jug… she was returning when sonam screamed horrified with the fact that a truck was approaching her and she was not concern about it.. maan saw that and immediately run to save her…

Before the truck could hit her he pulls her,, with twirl he took her out of the road and both landed on the ground maan on top of geet,, but shielding her with his hand with the fear she may hurt herself by the hard road… but in the process he got a cut on his hand.. he elbow slits and blood comes out… geet was in tears to see him like that, for a moment he saw her horrified and shaking hand,, the blood was not so much but she was crying… maan straight away hugged her to sooth her whimper… she comes out from the hug and pointed his cut,, he face was so cute, just like a baby but her crying was tormenting him, still he couldn’t understand what he was feeling then…. Geet fished out a handkerchief from his pocket and tied it round her elbow… he chuckle at her..

Maan: geet I though heroine always strip her dupatta and then tied the cloth around hero’s hand.. he tried to lighten the mood but her answer was worth laughing..

Geet: maan my duppata has already torn it have germs in it, if anything happen because of it then the cut will be more pain full, and beside that my dupatta is made of silk,, cotton is better for the bandage.. she said innocently… maan broke in to smile…

Everyone laughed at them but silently, because they knew her concern in that statement…

Maan: geet u should take care of ur self na,, the truck was coming didn’t u saw that… geet nodded in no… geet aagar kuch hojata to…

Geet smiles: when u are there what can touch me….

 

 

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Present

 

 

Maan looked away from her tantalizing gaze,, couldn’t bear the nave faith n love that she had once for him,, maybe still he hold that place in her heart but the place had faded with time, and burden of responsibility.. least he knew the place once geet gave anyone its impossible to fade or erase the position, whether it love respect or hatred…

 

 

 

Geet was in her room staring at the moon,, a piece of cloth was in her hand,, he caresses the red color,, it was drenched in blood.. His blood… that is the piece she had tied on his hand on the cut… when doctor did the bandage she kept this in her purse, resembling of his love n care… when he broke her heart she tried to throw it but found herself engulf in it, she had clutches the piece close to her heart from that time till now….

 

Where at the same time maan was fishing something from her bag, he was in panic not finding it,, and then something hit his hand, he took out, it was Her Paaje (Anklet)…. This is the last memory he had of her,, this was the last thing of her that always with him in his all good bad time… the last day geet stepped out of the college campus and his life she had tripped it on the ground, after her going maan saw something flashing on the ground, he took it and then remember it was geet’s…

 

 

he still kept this in his heart, soul close to him… alone tears rolled down from his eyes remembering thode golden days and his betrayal… he felt ashamed to broke a innocent’s heart…. He sighed and hugged the anklet…

 

both drifted to sleep thinking of each other in pain n love….

 

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Next day,,,

 

It was around 5 pm when finally everyone were settle to go to the party, sonam was excited because of her plan, veer is not going that means geet n maan can have some quality time and she will made unnati busy with rohan, perfect.. but all her hopes dreams went to drain when she saw the sight… veer coming down dressed in suit.. aadi n dev tried to stop him but he said he can’t leave geet like that.. sonam was irritated with his behavior, he wanted to bang his head with a rod right then but he smiles at her, she have to give her best mocking smile… maan chuckle to see his crazy little sister,, and then suddenly everyone’s attention caught a sight geet was coming clad in a long lahenga,, the blouse was short covering her cleavage,, and her full waist n belly was covering with the thin material of her heavy work dupatta.. the skirt was heavy and full flaunt… but the jewelry was extra heavy… maan was gaping at her with utmost longing.. everyone was dumbfounded to see geet in that attire… unnati came close to her and put a kala tika….

 

 

 

Unnati: sach geet aaj to aap gazab dhah rahi, u r looking absolutely gorgeous.. geet smiles at her, but I never saw this jewelry I mean the necklace on u,, u never liked heavy thing… u prefer to choose simple… geet looked at veer who was looking at her intently mesmerized by her beauty… but then his eye shade change in to anger… he looked at her with fire in his eyes… she bite her lips and looks away….

Unnati: don’t tell me it’s a gift from dada… she teased and geet smiles weakly…. Maan was burning with the sight… he headed to the exit without waiting for anyone…

Geet sighed and came to veer’s side…

Veer whisper: what is that…

Geet: trust me veer… she pleaded and he calm himself…

Veer: I will be there…

Geet: why u r stressing yourself, u r not fully recovered…

Veer: I can’t let u go alone…

Rohan: hello bhai sahib hum sab bhi the….

Veer smiles at him and then said: I can’t trust anyone with her matter.. geet felt his hand wrapped around her shoulder and all of them headed towards the haveli…

 

 

 

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Geet clenched her fist to control herself to see the Haveli,, past was flashing like it was only yesterday,, her eyes were glittery.. the view was mesmerizing,, aadi was gaping at the beauty of the palace,, dev was making fun of him where 2 person was only watching Geet,, maan was looking her hurtful face,, he was feeling sad for her where veer was looking at her worried…

 

 

 

All enters the palace,,it was beautiful and big haveli, one of the most beautiful palace in jaiselmer..  there was silence for sometime. All were gaping at geet in awe… maan turn to look at geet, he was kind of shocked to see her hard face,, and then saw veer hand was on her waist and she was quite comfortable with it,, but it didn’t burn maan but hurt him because she was pretending something…

Geet didn’t feel anything,, veer touch was nothing at this moment,, the rage the agony she was feeling right this moment she can burn the whole clan… everyone bowed their head infront of geet… but sh edidn’t give a damn she just walked upto the main persons…. Veer was tried hard to control her but he himself was enough angry…

 

veer: hmm so reception of that bas***d,,,,

geet: hume nayee dulhan ko bidhwah(widow) dekhne me bohot takleef hogi,, she said with sheer rage n disgust,, veer gulp his saliva but geet immediately soften her eyes.. umm chale?

 

veer: geet please…

geet: lets go,, the game has begin…

 

a sweet smirks was playing on her face when he saw the faces of her relatives… their faces was dull to see her like that…

geet: Namaste badhe mama saheb (its mean maternal uncle, it’s a custom to call him like that)

mama: Geetanjali,, his voice was weak,, geet smiles at him,, and then shift her gaze to her 2nd uncle…

geet: I hope u have missed me a lot chote mama saheb…

veer: of course he had missed u princess…

they met with everyone,, her relatives were gazing maan’s family n friends in confusion… veer introduce them with her uncles n their families…

some one from the crowd call her: how r u Rajkumari Geetanjali… she looks at him and bowed her head a little not bending her pride n head….

Geet: i m perfectly fine with MY family Magistrate… she saw a group of 5 older men coming towards them,, a soothing smile on the head one’s face… he cupped her face…

Geet: kaise hain aap nanasa…

Nanasa: aap ko bohot miss kiya Geetanjali,, u still call me nanasa…

Geet: yes,, after my grandfather’s death u r the one who give me the love of him,, though u are his friend but for me u are my nanasa,, but yeah here I was expecting u,, u have to watch me n veer… u r magistrate of the state,, so what do u think about us.. she asked cheerfully,, and held veer’s hand….

Nanasa: I think I can made my report now,, u are looking perfect, I was in hesitation that he may not coax u and this state need a responsible king,, I was wrong judging the 18 yr old boy,, but now u seems really happy with him n his family…

Mamasa interfare in them: magistrate u have just came,, please enjoy the party first and then we have another party day after tomorrow… he nodded, and geet smirks at him, the team excused…

 

Now she turn her gaze towards the person… Pratap Singh…. Her aunt’s brother…

geet: are mama saheb u haven’t call us on HIS marriage,, just directly on the reception party? humse itna gussa the kya? or u thought i can be the harm of his way..he uncle’s face was enrage with her words but he couldn’t do anything… she turn to see the person who was shivering and sweating… she smirks… hume to laga its an AC hall,, but u r sweating like a pig… unnati broke in laughter… the man saw unnati with lustful eyes but then all his smirk turn in pain and he saw his foot is under geet’s shoe… and she was staring at him with angry glare but with a sweet smirk… 

 

geet left his foot and then turn to his WIFE,, the girl is innocent, her heart arch to see the little girl,, she is mare 18 only,, but she was happy, her glowing face was saying that… but the match was awful,, a man age of 32 with lust in his eyes and the innocent girl who is merely 17 or 18…

geet: hum jante the apki nazar to aisi hi hoga,,, wife acchi chuni hain Mr Pratap Singh..  but I haven’t brought any gift for her,, the girl looks at her smilingly…

girl: aap agayi yehi khafi hain rajkumariji…

geet: may I know ur name?

Ayesha

Geet: and ur age?

Ayesha looks here n there,, everyone just gasp at her question but geet was looking at her only… she whisper: 16…

Get clenched her fist and gave a disgusting look to her so call family… and then she unclasp her own necklace,, the heavy necklace has gave it mark on her slender neck…it has turn red n blue somewhere…

She tied it on Ayesha who was baffled: rajkumari ye?

Geet: its belongs to u only…

Her badhi mamisa interfare: but geetanjali ye apki hain…

Geet: don’t u thing it was quite painful for a girl at age of 13? I was that when u gave me this,, right mamisa, but now I guess it belongs to a girl at age of 16,, her each word was confusing for others but it was perfectly understandable for her family… u have given me this and now I m returning it with some more things,, she signal her servant to proceed and then everyone saw the amount of jewelry and dresses and various thing came in a row… and mark my word I will return everything u have given me but with double benefit…

Her mamisa gulp hard to see the anger… geet’s cousin came,, and distract everyone with their jasan(celebration)…

 

Prithbi her elder uncle’s son was introducing her with everyone, and then mohini her next cousin came to veer’s side,, she was looking at him with dreamy eyes… she approach a dance with him,, geet raises her eyes brow but the mischievous sonam pushed veer with her….

 

 

 

Precap: he putted his sword on her neck and it slit through her skin,, geet flinched….

 

banner credit goes to tanu aka tanvi nangia my sweetheart,,,

place is Jawaharnivas Palace Jaiselmer…

and then the hall is of Gorbandh Palace,, yes both are differnt i just merged in it…

and for me think it as a plot of the ss

 

 

 

 

Guys I know some of u are confuse with geet’s behavior and her words, but I will say wait for one or two update,, ffull past is coming out and a full dhamaka, with twist ofcourse…

 

And now,, please please please hit the like n do cmnt, I need it badly,, it will charge me more after the heavy bed rest I have faced in 4 days….

 

 

IMPORTANT NOTE….

Ok an announcement,, we have made a page in FB where we are starting new ffs for Geet season 2,, means many writer will write a new story once in a weak so that way reader will get everyday a new story to read and writer will have their own sweet time to write next part,, one writer will post one update in a week,, but have to particular on it,, u can choose any day for it also…. Till now 7 or 8 writers are ready to write we are waiting for more response, so writer if u want to write for Geet season 2 please come on the page… or pm me….

U will have ur own story with ur own tittle,, u can make it as fb note or IF thread anything u want…. Only one option…. I don’t thinks if difficult to write one update for it in ONE WEEK…. So please come guys we need u…

We will start the story at 5th April,, the auspicious day of Geet anniversary,, if u are interested to write for it please give a prologue or chr sketch on 5th April atleast… SO COME ON,,, GIVE ME UR VIEW….

And READERS U ALL ARE WELCOME TO THE PARADISE OF GEET SEASON 2 IN OUR WAY….

GEET- Beginning of a New Era 

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3 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by afrin on March 26, 2012 at 7:59 pm

    waitin for twist n offcourse d reason of her anger…

    Reply

  2. Posted by anamikasb on March 27, 2012 at 6:32 am

    Get well soon dear 🙂
    AND LOVED YOUR UPDATE 😀

    Reply

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