Kaise Kahen part 10

 

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Oye mere teaser ne to sabka dimag kharab kar diya but I want to say one thing don’t fly too high because if u fall then chot bhi badhe jhatke se lagegi wo bhi in tichu’s style’. Tich smiling devilishly’.

And about the teaser I said earlier means yesterday will come in next part so now just enjoy the love n pain with saying,,,

 

Kaise Kahen



warning: its really long more than 6000 words so read at ur own risk, don’t blame me later for eating ur brainLOLLOL and i want double cmnts now n likes now, it took me lots of time to write it and this is longest update ever in my life not even K3 was long, so i have warned u before hand…LOLLOL its kind of MAHA UPDATE

Part 10

 

Prithbi her elder uncle’s son was introducing her with everyone, and then mohini her next cousin came to veer’s side,, she was looking at him with dreamy eyes’ she approach a dance with him,, geet raises her eyes brow but the mischievous sonam pushed veer with her’.

 

Geet saw her cousin was trying to grab veer’s attention’ mohini her cousin who is 2yrs younger than her, really beautiful but one obsession, grabbing everyone’s attention.. specially veer, geet knew she has a soft corner for veer but veer had never gave any look to her’ the soft music was playing and she knew everyone’s attention is on her only,, being a princess and would be queen every move of her are considerable for her future’  

 

Sonam was really enjoying the sight,, dev n aadi was nervous with the whole situation and maan was staring at geet only who seems like lost in her world’ sonam wanted to divert her mind to veer so she walked up to her’

Sonam: geet look at ur cousin n Fianc,, seems like both are good in dance’ geet looked at the duo’ veer was looking at her only’ mohini guide his hand on her waist and she placed her both hand on his shoulder’. There was an eye lock between geet, her once glance to his hold on mohini’s waist made him gulp hard, geet chuckle silently not giving anyone any view of her mind’ a waiter came and offered geet some soft drink, geet lazily took it with elegance’. All the crowd was watching veer’s dance with mohini’ veer twirl her 2 time and then she came in his embrace, mohini was very happy’.

Maan came by geet side, he wanted to know her reaction’ but nothing can come out from her face because she had wear a mask that no one can break’ she smiles at maan’

Maan: r u ok?

Geet: ha maan hum thik hain..

Maan: umm veer’

Geet smiles: he is a good dancer..

Maan: geet why u r hurting urself in all this, geet glared maan’

Geet: we can talk about this later’

 

Geet was going to take a sip from her soft drink when a strong hand stop her’ she looked at a enraged veer’ veer took the glass and elegantly pulls her towards him’ maan clenched his fist.. but veer took her on the dance floor, twirling her again n again.. both were talking with eye’

Veer pulls her and she land on his chest’. He was furious anyone can say that’

Veer: what r u doing?

Geet looked at him with confuse face: what?

Veer came close to her ear whispering: I told u geet don’t do any mistake, don’t dare to take anything of this place’ never take any drinks or don’t go anywhere when I m not with u’.

Geet: but veer there are so many people’

Veer closed his eyes in frustration: princess please, u have to be more sharp of judging people’ promise me u will not take or will not do anything without consulting me’.

Geet sighed: ok’. They were real close and everyone was thinking they were sharing some privet moments,, some praises their pair, some were burning in jealousy’ mohini was hating the sight’ veer and get parted for sometime and she smiles at him letting her take the charge of the dance’

 

She was oblivious with the fact that a pair of eyes is looking at her every move’.

 

 

Tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka

Tuzhe chaahtaa koi aur hai

 

Tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka

Tuzhe chaahtaa koi aur hai

 

Tu pasand hai kisi aur ki

Tu pasand hai kisi aur ki

Tuzhe maangtaa koi aur hai

 

Tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka

Tuzhe chaahtaa koi aur hai

 

The song hit her eardrum and she missed a beat knowing who that be’ she looked at Maan over Veer’s shoulder and all she can see pain n guilt, pain of seeing her in another man’s arm and guilt of losing her’ sonam was witnessing her brother’s pain where other crowd was enjoying the song oblivious with the meaning of the song’.

Dev and aadi was feeling miserable to see maan like that’.

 

Kaun apna hai

Kya begaanaa hai

Kya hakeekat hai

Kya fasaanaa hai

 

 

Maan smiles at them and sang taking a drink in his hand looking straight in geet’s eyes’

 

 

Kaun apna hai

Kya begaanaa hai

Kya hakeekat hai

Kya fasaanaa hai

Ye jamaane mein

Kisne jaanaa hai

Ye jamaane mein

Kisne jaanaa hai

 

 

Veer saw maan singing and smiles at him,, he twirl geet with the music,, whole crowd was clapping for the couple, they were looking happy with each other least anyone know what is going in her heart’ she looked at maan and tried to gaze him her heart but only pain was visible in both eyes’

 

 

Tu najar mein hai kisi aur ki

Tuzhe dekhtaa koi aur hai

 

Tu najar mein hai kisi aur ki

Tuzhe dekhtaa koi aur hai

Tu pasand hai kisi aur ki

Tuzhe mangta koi aur hai

 


Tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka

Tuzhe chaahtaa koi aur hai

 

 

Mohini smirks seeing the sight, somehow she was thinking she can get maan, he is handsome too, and she heard that he is really rich, prince of delhi and hot bachelor,, Udaiveer nahi to Maan sahi.. she found him more hot n handsome’ she went towards him and offered a dance, maan didn’t look at her at all,, but then she pulls him in a dance’

 

Pyaar mein aksar

Aisa hota hai

Koi hanstaa hai

Koi rotaa hai

 

Maan smiles at his fate,, once she loved him unconditionally and all he gave her is pain, she took his all pain but with a smile gave him a hollowness that can never fill with anything’. geet’s back was touching veer, both were moving slowly, geet’s eyes were on maan only,, her heart was crying but she can’t show it,, she put a hard mask to control her bleeding wound’  geet’s eyes fell on his hold on mohini’s waist,, but she didn’t show anything, no pain no jealousy no sorrow,, but maan knew what she is going on because he is feeling the same pain now,, once he was blind and didn’t recognize her pain but now when he is getting same pain he was relieving her every soreness so he thought, least he know this was causing her more pain,, seeing him like this only increase her sadness’

 

 

Pyaar mein aksar

Aisa hota hai

Koi hanstaa hai

Koi rotaa hai

Koi paataa hai

Koi khotaa hai

 

Koi paataa hai

Koi khotaa hai

 

Maan looked at veer who was lost in geer, he can feel his unconditional love, somewhere he felt veer’s love is much more stronger than his, he loves her more than him but he knew her happiness is lying on him,, he want her not because he can’t live without her but he can see she is living like a soulless body, only putting a hard mask’ she is drown with responsibility but she has lost her life in it,, he want her happiness, and for that he has to stoop very low, and he is ready for that also, because this life is now not his, its belongs to his Geet now’ he can give anything to see her happiness, anything to get one glimpse of old geet who was selflessly in love with him but now lost somewhere in the friendship, friendship and ? and what maybe some kind of rage that he never knew that exist’ her dark side that only her best friend veer knew’ its pained him that the most important thing that should he know is known by another man’ no not another man,, her best friend who is selflessly in love with her.. he smiles at his fate sadly’

 

 Tu jaan hai kisi aur ki

Tuzhe jaantaa koi aur hai

 Tu jaan hai kisi aur ki

Tuzhe jaantaa koi aur hai

Tu pasand hai kisi aur ki

Tuzhe mangta koi aur hai

 

 

Tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka

Tuzhe chaahtaa koi aur hai

 

 The beats change and all the pairs changes their partner,, geet came to maan who held her tight,, her eyes was showing how much pain she is carrying in it but couldn’t dare to show it for once, he caresses her face without showing t anyone because light was dim for few mins’ she tried to go from his clutch but he held her bare waist firmly, she looked at his eyes getting lost in the pool of love n pain’ both doesn’t knew what to say or rather, how to say those unsaid grief, Kaise Kahen pyar to hain, lekin iqraar nahi kar sakte, kabhi ye dil to kabhi duniya kabhi in dono ko kuch kehne ko hi nahi deti’ (how to say how much love they posses, but can’t accept the feeling, sometime this heart and sometime the world didn’t let them say those unsaid grief’.)

 

 

Maan pleaded to her with his eyes to show some love but she decided to seal it within her, he brought her more close touching her skin with his breath’

Maan: u can’t hide ur emotion, not from me geet’ she looked at him blankly, and then smiles sadly, now he can understand her heart without saying anything but there was a time she want him to know her feeling but he was too lost in his life n happiness, and now she can’t give him a 2nd chance, but he can sense her feeling without uttering a single word, what an Irony’.

 

She couldn’t help her not singing the phase’

 

 

 

 

Sochti hoon main

Chup rahoon kaise

Dard dil kaa yeh

Main sahoon kaise

 

Sochti hoon main

Chup rahoon kaise

Dard dil kaa yeh

Main sahoon kaise

 


Kashmakash mein hoon

Ye kahoon kaise

Kashmakash mein hoon

Ye kahoon kaise

 

 

She freed herself from maan and turn to face the world,, she smiles sadly at her fate,, sonam was crying silently seeing her best friend in so much sorrow and torment,, so was other, unnati doesn’t knew what was going because she was lost in rohan, but veer can sense geet’s sadness,, he signal what happen to which she smiles and assured she is ok’

 

She went to veer and hugged him, he was dumbfounded with her action, she placed her head and closed her eyes’. Letting few drop fall down her angelic face’

 

 

 

Mera humsafar bas yek tu

Nahin doosraa koi aur hai

 

Mera humsafar bas yek tu

Nahin doosraa koi aur hai

 

She looks at him and smiles to which veer felt something is torn in him, her smiles has the power to force anyone to smile but now it was forcing him to held her close because he knew its not for happiness it because she was shattering into pieces’

Tu pasand hai kisi aur ki

Tuzhe mangta koi aur hai

 

 

Tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka

Tuzhe chaahtaa koi aur hai

 

 

Maan clenced his fist and unknowing letting the glass piece slitting his skin as it was long broken in his palm’.

 

After few time geet looks around to find maan but he was nowhere to seen’ she was feeling scared.. but couldn’t go out because everyone was just indulging her in everything’

Ayesha: Rajkumari ji u are a very good singer and ur friend also, geet’s uncle raise her eye brow’

Mama: its doesn’t suit a princess to have a male Friend’

Geet snap her eyes: its non of ur concern Mama sahib, when my would be husband is ok with it I don’t think I should give u any expiation of course when u lost the right a very long time’.. he looks at her with angered eyes but geet only smirks at him, Magistrate came and blessed geet’

Geet: nanasa I m sure u will be here in another day’

He smiles understanding her meaning’

Nanasa: but I have seen what I suppose to know long back,, veer is perfect and he will be a good husband n King’.

Geet smiles weakly and her whole family were burning in rage’

Veer smiles and took blessing from him geet too, but nanasa hugged her and whisper in her ears

Nanasa: I know u have responsibility but I want to see u happy, and I know with whom u will be happy’ geet looked at him shocked’ yes age speaks experience’ he patted her cheeks, being ur grand -father I always want u to be happy’ geet lowered her lashes controlling her tears,, nanasa didn’t said anything but took their leave’

Veer: I think we should leave also’

Mohini: did u have ur dinner udai?

Veer looked at her least interested: we did it’ lets go guys..

Elder mama: Udaiveer we will appreciate if u guys stay here till the party day after tomorrow’

Veer: no thanks maharaj, we should get go now, its quite late and Geetanjali should take rest’ thank u for the welcome’

Younger mama: we will like to invite u all at lunch tomorrow.. we will be waiting for u’ he said with a  smile’

Geet: we will inform u’

 

 

Not giving any chance to speak geet walked out from there’

 

 

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Geet found maan outside staring at the blank space,, his hand was bleeding,, she was frightened to see his red hand’ she bite her lips to control her tears.. veer excuse himself as he got a urgent call’ geet instantly goes towards maan’ his back was facing her, she came close to him and looked for others, sonam tried to divert unnati n rohan’s attention’ she is a total sweetheart who knew how to help her friend without letting her know that’  geet took maan’s hand, he shivers with her touch’ but seeing her so close he just jerks his hand’ but geet is geet,, she is also stubborn, she took out his handkerchief and tied around his hand to stop the bleeding’

Maan chuckle: I thought heroine always ties her dupatta on hero’s hand’

Geet: my dress made with silk and its unhygienic for wound.. both smiles looking at each other remembering the incident 3 yrs back’ but tears also spilled out from geet’s eyes. She turn around to hold her tears and started walking away when maan held her hand’

Maan: u can never come out the past’

Geet: I never wanted too maan’

His grip loosen as he saw veer was approaching them..

Veer: chale?

Geet nodded and all headed towards their palace’

 

 

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It was 11 pm when geet enters veer’s room, she was not feeling well with the environment, so wanted to talk with him to calm herself..She knew only Veer can handle the storm she is facing now’ she saw him struggling with medicine and winching in pain, she immediately ran towards him’

He was shirtless, she was not sure what to do,, she turn her face and tried to go from there when veer held her hand’

Veer: princess u have seen me from the age of 1 day’

Geet giggles,, yeah both knew each other from then when geet was One day only, actually more than that, she was a princess of veer from the time when she came in her mother’s womb’

Veer: and u have seen me like this god know how many times,

Geet: veer u should call some servant for the medicine na,, kuch hojata to?

Veer’s face fell: I though u will say I should call u,, she looked at him guiltily,, veer was in panic to see her face dull,, no no princess I m just joking, I know after marriage u will be there for me, no need to do all this now, he smiles uncomfortably.. when geet took the ointment and slowly applied the area of wound, veer control his mourn of pain’ his princess was soothing him’ her tears fell and she slowly touched another mark on his back, that has turn black,, this is the reason of her hatred for her family,, and for her respect towards him.. veer can see her touching the place’ it didn’t hurt him more now,, but to hear her whimper its torn him apart’ he cupped her face’. Please don’t cry princess’

Geet: ye sab hamare wajah se’

Veer: sshhh,, its not ur fault at all’. He hugged her tight patting her back’.

 

 

 

Just the sight burn Him and his whole body was having the flame of the rage.. he is furious to see His Geet in another man’s arm,, that too in the compromising position’ he was feeling burning the whole world’.  His was clutching the wounded hand more, blood was oozing out from his fist but he didn’t care.. his life is burning how can he concentrate on a small wound where his heart is slitting every moment’

 

Geet heard some noise and turn to see who is this but no one was there, she saw a shadow going away from the door’. Her heart was beating fast thinking the terror’

 

Geet: veer u take rest, I m going now..

Veer: ok, gdni8′.

Geet: gdni8′.

 

 

 

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Geet searched for maan in the whole palace but he was nowhere to seen’ but then she heard some noise and follow that,, she enter the open Gym’ it was a big room with open balcony giving a full view of the city’ it was on the 3rd floor of the palace’ geet’s eyes widen to see HIM hurting himself vigorously’.

 

 

He was practicing his thi chi’ her eyes were scanning him head to toe,, his bare muscle was sweating making him more hot and desirable,,, geet’s heart was thumping like volcano, 1st seeing him like that and then the rage in his eyes.. she shivered thinking the reason of his anger’ she saw him doing his moves with ease but with full of aggression’ maan was panting heavily but he didn’t stop instead speed up his moves’ he didn’t see her as she was standing in a dark corner,, her eyes welled up to see him hurting his bleeding hand,, she wanted to stop him but couldn’t, she was afraid not because of him but with her heart that is betraying her every now n then’

 

 

Maan caught her smell,, how can he not recognize her scent’ he turn to see her but she was fast enough to hide herself behind the curtain.. maan looks around finding no one,, but he can’t be wrong identify her presence’ he smirks and started proceeding towards her direction.. geet gulp hard to control her pounding heart that seems like can popped out any moment’

 

 

maan was really close to her but the curtain was hiding her very well so he didn’t see her but he wasn’t ready to believe that’. he return to his place,, a large and thick piece of Ice Plate was lying between two rack when maan stood there.. geet was seeing him again but her eyes were on his bleeding hand’ it was terribly in bad condition’ and then he with one jump broke the Ice layer’ his cut got deepen and he flinched with it’.

 

 

Geet: Maannn,, she screamed and ran towards him’. she took his hand in her hand crying holding it close to her heart’ ye aap kya kar rahe hain? why u r doing this? why u r punishing Yourself? Why maan why?

Maan jerks his hand and grip her arms: because I can’t see u in another man’s arm’ I can’t see u suffer like this’ samjhi tum? I can’t see u with that veer.. everything burn in me,, that’s why I m burning myself now’ I m repenting my deeds,,, because of that I lost u and now my life is nothing but a hollowness in a dark valley,, my life is empty without u and that’s why I want it tarnish with every moment, my body is soulless,,, that’s why I m burning this body also’.

Geet cried: maannn.. that’s give me pain’ ur punishment towards u also punish me, only give me the pain, why u r giving me so much pain? Boliye maan? ek baar humne bohot muskil se apne aap ko sambhala tha abb aur nehi’ I would not be able to collect the pieces of my broken heart now, please don’t do this to me, u know your every pain give me pain’ then why u r giving me these pain, I can’t handle anymore maan.. please stop this’.

 

Maan couldn’t tolerate her choked voice, he can see how much she is torning between all this,, she can’t see one flinch on his face and he giving her so pain by giving himself the torture’ he held her arms and pulls close to him and sealed her lips with his, kissing her madly’. Her eyes were blur, she didn’t see what is coming but soon felt his rough lips on her,, for a moment she forgot everything, her all pain because this time she wanted to sooth his pain’ she closed her eyes blocking and right wrong judgment of her act and kissed him back,, he loosen his grip on her arms and held her waist tightly,, her hand encircle with his neck pulling him close to her.. his one hand was on her waist and one was cupping her back crushing her petite body to him’ he pressed his tongue on her lips and she let him enter her mouth,, he explode her every hidden secret,, she sucked his upper lips and then his lower lips where he was pressing his tongue more in her making her moan in pleasure..  both forgot their surroundings.. only enjoying this moment,, maan was kissing her vigorously crushing her petal like lips making it bleed an soon licking it to sooth her pain’ she didn’t stop him because she knew how much pain he is going through’ she let him do whatever he want,, soon both felt short of breath and break apart but maan didn’t leave her but comes to her neck placing hot sensual kisses making her eyes droopy in desire’

 

Maan: leave him geet,, he said between the kisses’ leave everything and come with me’ I know u can’t live without me,, and me too. please come to me geet’ he kisses her jaw and shoulder.. geet tried to understand his meaning but his desire was making her weak to think anything’. please Geet Leave Veer’ he pleaded but that was enough for geet to come back to her senses’ she jerks him’ Geet’ he whisper’

Geet showed her hand: ek shabd nahi maan’ u know I can’t’ he voice was weak’ maan was frustrated with her behavior, once she is showing her love for him with her action aand 2nd side she can’t hear a word against veer, she can’t leave him’ that was enough for maan.. he harshly pulls her close to him’

Maan: Veer Veer Veer, what about Us geet? Where is me in this, I can see u still loves me then why can’t u accept that, why can’t u told everything to veer.. I know he is a good man and will accept your condition, he also want ur happiness.. and don’t u dare say u are happy with him,, if u were then u wouldn’t allow me to touch u once’ was this right geet? Aren’t u cheating on Veer?

 

That was a slap for geet,, she looked at him shocked and with anger’. He closed his eyes feeling regret of his words’

 

Geet: u proved once again that I really can’t resist u,, not 3yrs back not now,, u make me feel how low I can go maan,, yes I respond ur touches,, how cheap I m na maan? cheating on my would be husband’ he tried to stop her but she stops him showing her hand’ no maan u are right,, I m cheating on my best friend who is loves me more than anything’ but do u know what,, I feel ashamed that I can’t give him the same love n respect he gave me all life,, do u know why? Because I still can’t forget u’ ur touches ur false promise.. ur betrayal.. ur farce Love’ yeas farce all was a big joke for u then and now u are in love with me and wanted to claim me’ u know I can’t compare ur false love with veer’s because he never tried to claim me, he always let me go to knowing I can’t love him, knowing I love someone else’

Maan was shocked to hear her outburst’  her tears were continuously flowing’ I can’t compare my love with him also,, because I can’t match his love in any life’ her love is worship for him’ knowing I love someone else he was the one who handle me,, in fact he had tried to search you because I was shattered, he was ready to beg u to have me in ur life because he can’t see his love like that,, I was dead maan,, I was dead, a lifeless body which give him pain.. he loved me all the way from childhood but still for my happiness he was read to sacrifice that and u are saying leave him’. chi maan ur love is so selfish’.

Maan looked at her eyes and tighten his jaw’.

Maan: yes I m being selfish’ selfish in your love.. selfish to have u, to give u the happiness u deserves’ u urself had accepted geet u don’t love him,, do u even think what is the future of a relation which doesn’t have love in it’ what is the meaning of that relation which doesn’t have the foundation of love from both side.. do u think veer will be happy after knowing u can never love him,, wasn’t it cheating him, because all the life he will try to keep u happy knowing u can’t, and u will be living a life of guilt.. guilt of not loving him the same way he does’  I know I have done very big mistake,, but geet I m a human, can’t I get a 2nd chance? Geet looked at him with tears’ geet this 3 yrs I get to know how much u and it only increased day by day’ now I can feel the pain u had faced once,, think once geet the pain of loving one and not getting the same love from ur partner hows it feel’ then how will veer feel when he see no love in your eyes for him’. geet please try to think with ur heart not mind..

 

Geet was crying bitterly and slides down on the floor’. Maan slipped in fron of him’ u love me geet only me and I love you’ with all my heart n soul I love u’ she closed her eyes hearing those magical words that she always wanted to hear’ please geet come back to me, he pleaded to her again n again’  please leave veer geet’ please tell him the truth’

Geet sobbed: I can’t maan.. he will be shattered and I can’t let him break down’ maan looked at her with furious eyes’ he pulls her hearshly making her stand on her feet’

Maan: then what do u want ha?? He shouted on her, thankfully they are in a further corner of the palace where no sound can reach to anyone’ what do u want geet living this life with broken heart but not one 1, 3 lives will ruin’ do u want this? do u know how I felt when I saw u with him, 1st in party then here, u were in his arms,, I was burning’ I was feeling crushing everything, destroying everyone, every amn thing. Even ur Best Friend Veer’. geet looked at him shocked, she gulp her saliva seeing his angry eyes.. I was feeling like destroying everyone who has dare to touch MY GEET’..  I want to take that man’s life to even seeing u with love’ geet held her heart and bite her lips to control her sob’ I was feeling crushing his mare existence’

Geet: the person u want to crush had save ur Geet every time’ he looked at her blank.. she was staring at his eyes pierching his soul’ YOUR GEET is living because of him, because he didn’t care once for his life to save me knowing he can be dead’ her voice was low but powerful, she was not looking at him with anger or anything it was some kind of strong feeling because now what she is going to say will torn him out’ will bleed his heart to such an extent that he might lose his control and burn everything’.

Maan: Geet, his voice was like whisper’

Geet: do u know why I was crying hugging him? it because of me he always suffered’ its because of me he had lost his everything’ its because of me he lost his parents and he little brother.. geet’s tears spilled out, we lost our Garv because of me’ he lost everything maan only because of me’

 

                               I was 10 nearly 11 to be precious when we get the news of our parent’s accident’ our parents died on the same day’ I was shattered losing my Maa baba, maharaj n raanima’. Our family was friends from generation’ we lived in Udaipur for generations’ I don’t know from when exactly’ maharaj n raanima always loved me more than their own daughter and sons’ Veer was 5 yrs elder than me and unnati was same like me,, Garv was 6yrs’ he was an apple of everyone’s eyes, everyone loved him a lot but he loved me the most..

 

I never met with my maternal family but heard they didn’t like baba or maharaj because he is the best king in india and baba was his best friend, being a king my uncle doesn’t like them because of rivalry’ maa loved baba so nanasa(grandfather) got them married but my uncles didn’t improve that’ we were really happy in my life, veer was always over protective towards me, he didn’t let me go anywhere alone not even with my friends, in fact he had arranged my education in the palace,, our parents didn’t said anything, sometime I got irritated with his behavior and thrown lots of tantrums but he always took them without any words,, i always blame him for everything some where I started hating him for making my life miserable’. I didn’t know why he was doing that but I hate that’

 

And then we lost our parents.. my whole world came crushing down’ I saw their lifeless body wrapping with white sheet’ unnati was crying veer was silent but I could see what he was feeling then,,, then my gaze shift on the small lifeless body, it was garv’ my little garv’ I held his body and shook him to get up but he didn’t budge’ I was shouting madly but no one wake up’ everybody said they left us, how can they left us I was thinking only this’

They started taking them, I held garv close to my heart, my little devil can’t leave me like this, no one can dare to took him from my arms’ but then veer came and tried to calm me, I hit him but didn’t let him take garv’ everyone was trying to snatch him but I was not ready, I haven’t cried for once’ only one thing was on my lips, they can’t leave me’. but the truth was they did’ veer tried again but I didn’t loosen my hold’  then he did that no one can think ever in their life.. he slap me’ I never though he can slap me ever but he did, he slap me so hard that I started crying’

Geet looked at maan: do u know what he did after that? maan looked at her with pain’ he had burned that hand’  maan looked at her shocked’

I came to know this after that day’ everyone was in panic so I enter his room and saw him flinching in pain and his palm was in worse condition that I can ever think’ it was fully burn, the flesh was hanging and I felt like something lurch me’ I sat close to him, everyone tried to take me but he signal me to sit their,, I was staring at his hand only,,, tears were coming continuously’

 

Geet; I m so

Veer; I m sorry princess for hitting u, I know I m really bad,, I m sorry’ I didn’t meant to hurt u but u need to cry, because doctor said that so I had to slap u because no one in this world has the right to hit u, not even me so that’s why I punished myself, u know dadisa loves me so much that she will never say anything’

I sobbed miserably looking at his hand,

Veer: please princess don’t cry, I hate ur tears it hurt more that this’

I wiped my tears instantly’.

Veer: that’s good,, do u know princess why I always lock u in this palace? Why I didn’t let anyone come close to u? she shook her head innocently’ he smiles because u r too nave geet’.

That was the 1st time he called me geet,,, he always called me princess’.

Veer: geet u don’t know but ur maa and my kakisa said u r my gift and I should protect u,, u r the most beautiful girl in the world and many state has bad eyes on u,, but u can’t see them  so then I have to take care of u na?

I didn’t understand his meaning,, but just shook my head and cried saying sorry’

Veer: geet can I ask u something?

Geet: boliye

Veer: kya aap hamari dost banegi? I always wanted to become ur friend but u hate me always, didn’t even gave me a chance to say anything but now I badly want a friend,, maasa aur babsa bhi hume chodke chale gaye, I m really alone geet’

Geet placed her palm on his mouth: hum apke dost banenge, abb aap kabhi ye nahi kehna that u r alone’

Veer: but that doesn’t mean I will allow u to go out,, she frowns at him and he chuckle,, u will not understand princess what u r,, but one day u will understand my words’

 

True that day I didn’t understand his meaning but soon I got my lesson, a bitter lesson’ he was right I can never understand his meaning because I was too small for all this but things got worst in few yrs and I forced to be grown up before time’

 

 

Precap: same

 Shocking truth rather say disgusting truth’

And the teaser

 

VEERRR,,,, nothing will happen to u… please u can’t leave me like this… u can’t leave ur geet… please come back na,, see they will hurt me again if u will be not with me… please veer,, aapki geet mar jayegi apke bina… uthiye na…

 

 

 

banner and al pix credit goes to tanu aka tanvi nangia, love u sweetheart, muaaahhh

IMPORTANT NOTE’.

Ok an announcement,, we have made a page in FB where we are starting new ffs for Geet season 2,, means many writer will write a new story once in a weak so that way reader will get everyday a new story to read and writer will have their own sweet time to write next part,, one writer will post one update in a week,, but have to particular on it,, u can choose any day for it also’. Till now 7 or 8 writers are ready to write we are waiting for more response, so writer if u want to write for Geet season 2 please come on the page’ or pm me’.

U will have ur own story with ur own tittle,, u can make it as fb note or IF thread anything u want’. Only one option’. I don’t thinks if difficult to write one update for it in ONE WEEK’. So please come guys we need u’

We will start the story at 5th April,, the auspicious day of Geet anniversary,, if u are interested to write for it please give a prologue or chr sketch on 5th April atleast’ SO COME ON,,, GIVE ME UR VIEW’.

And READERS U ALL ARE WELCOME TO THE PARADISE OF GEET SEASON 2 IN OUR WAY’.

GEET- Beginning of a New Era 

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2 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by afrin on March 30, 2012 at 6:51 pm

    very long n nice update…. n waitin for next update toooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh………..

    Reply

  2. Posted by anamikasb on March 31, 2012 at 6:20 pm

    don’t kill veer please 😥

    Reply

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