Kagaz Ki Kashthi luv tht Sacrifices Life Part 78

 

 

 

Thank u soooooooooooooo very much for all te likes and comments, me actually famished with all teh love but i think my hunger will rise only…. sorry for not replying individually, u know till i can reply anyone i start typing another part 😉 so pls understand it… Thanks a again for those big comments, i trully lovedddddddddddddddd them…

 

PS: Abir Singhaniya is actually a bengali film star in Real, his name is DEV/Depak Adhikari.. as being living in Kolkata,, i have seen Bengali films as well, so naturally in this kind of role Dev is best in my vision so i had taken him here, hope i haven’t offended anyone..

 

Part 78

 

 

Whole day was hell for maan as geet purposely ignored him.. whenever he tried to say sorry she just walked out.. it was not enough that maahika was also angry with him, and that’s why whenever he carry her she would probably cry or wet his shirt… Shiv was again busy in meetings, so he couldn’t come there.. but his heart was not at peace.. remembering abir’s proximity with saanjh he felt anger rushed through his vein but why he was feeling so he himself wasn’t sure… and here abir was enjoying both girl’s attention.. they got him after 5 yrs so ofcourse taking extra care of him…. Maan sometime envy Abir’s plight, the way he was enjoying it he felt like he is doing it purposely to irritate him… but one thing was good maahika didn’t like abir much, because of him her mother n massi not sparing glances towards her so it was making her angry…. That’s why whenever abir tried to take maahika in his hand she would gurgle making her saliva smudged his shirt, or slap his hand, sometimes wetted his shirt.. she would shook her head indicating she doesn’t want to go to him…  Abir would make faces and maan enjoyed seeing it…

 

Maan cancelled the meeting, so that he can be with geet who was hell annoyed with his never ending romance in front of anyone and everyone, and when she would glare him he would say he will stop once she forgive him… though geet was enjoying the attention but sometime it become hell embarrassing… he would occasionally call her in the room for anything n everything… family all knew something is cooking up between two but the most teasing person was abir who silently made her face flushed with his teasing smirk…

 

Geet entered the room for the ninth time…

 

Geet: ufff maan huya kya?

 

Maan: geet I couldn’t find the file, please help me.

 

Geet: which file

 

Maan: Mehra’s

 

Geet looked at the bed where the file was lying,, she took the file and saw all the work was done.. she looked at maan angrily while maan gave her baby pleading look…

 

Geet: I m telling u for the ninth time, don’t waste ur n my time… she was going from the room when he pulls her wrist.. with the force she collide with his hard chest….

 

Though she was angry but his closeness always makes her lose herself,  she tried to push him but he slipped his hand in her bare waist bringing her close… she looked at his desire filled eyes, something crunched in her stomach… a deep shade of red hue covered her cheeks as his eyes roamed on her plump lips… his finger laced on her soft skin making her throat dry, her chest touched his as he was pulling her closer to him.. her palm clutched the collar of his shirt tightly in a fist.. she saw the mischievousness on his face….

 

Geet: don’t think u can pacify me by seducing…

 

Maan: do I need to seduce u? he said rather mischievously… just then she felt his breath near her earlobe, she tried to suppress her moan but nothing helped…

 

Geet: maan… her whisper made him smile victoriously, he felt her surrender herself.. he kissed her neck softly, then nipped her earlobe.. she clutched his shoulder… her breath was quick, her aroma was so intoxicating that he felt he will lose himself.. he placed few open mouth kisses around her jaw…

 

Maan: u can make me mad for u,, I love u so much… he whispered desperately… his hand rubbed her breast above the saree, squeezed it softly… he groans dipping his face in her neck..  she tried to resist him but nothing helped her as she felt warmness spreading her body… maan saw her vulnerable state.. he controlled his desire and kissed her forehead… she felt frustrated as he stopped,, she scratches his shoulder…

 

Geet: I hate u…. she said irritatingly..

 

Maan smiles: I love u… just few days more…

 

Geet: I hate u more…

 

She tried to push him but he held her in his arm, locking his both hand on her waist….

 

Maan: I m sorry, maaf kar do na abb? It brought back the reality, she didn’t said anything but some kind of pain was in her eyes,, he sighed and placed his forehead on her.. I know how it feels, u were good with me, I was feeling like strangling sujal… a small smile came on her lips hearing his honest confession, how can she be angry with him knowing he is truly sorry for unknowingly hurting her…

 

Geet: I fear to lose u maan,, I got this happiness after a lot of hardship, I don’t want to lose u…

 

Maan: no one can separate us, trust me.. I love u a lot… she hugged him tightly fearing if she loses her grip he will vanish, he sensed her fear and tighten his grip….

 

 

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It was dinner time and both the men specially Shiv was staring at Abir like his stare will burn him alive… he was observing saanjh n abir’s closeness… shiv came here with the false work of office… maan knew he is feeling insecure and thought to help him with his feelings, but before it he need to confront geet.. he need to make her belief shiv is right for saanjh, whatever happen geet maybe forgave shiv but she can’t accept him for her sister anymore. Knowing saanjh maan can say she loves him only and no other guy can take the same place as shiv…

 

Shiv: Maan don’t u think tera ghar dharamshala ban gaya hain, jo aata hain yehi rukta hain… maan chuckled at him knowing what he meant… abir smiles at him forcefully, but evil grin was visible on his face…

 

Abir: yeah like u glued them like chewing gum…

 

Shiv: excuse me, its my nanima’s house…

 

Geet passed the rice bowl to abir but as he was denying she put some rice in his plate.. he smiles sweetly and held geet hand..

 

Abir: its my geetu’s house too… he said sweetly,, geet smiles but maan felt strangling him for holding his wife’s hand… he glared at geet who chuckled at him, then his anger goes on abir who immediately left her hand…

 

Shiv murmured: pata nahi kab tak chipka rahega

 

Abir: ohh I forgot, why I m here.. Geetu  Sanju pack ur bags we are going rano massi’s house next morning for further marriage preparation…

 

Maan chocked his food on his plate where shiv by chance lost the grip on glass and it fell on the dining table making everything shattered… maan glared at shiv who was just dumbfounded with the new information..

 

Shiv: what do u mean?

 

Abir: Its ritual, and rano massi told me to come with them.. that’s why I m here… he smiles cheekily looking at maan to shiv and shiv to maan….

 

Nt spoke then: can’t u guys talk after dinner,, abir tried to help to control the mess but nt stop him… Aree Abir ye aap kyun kar rahe ho, we are here na,, we will clean it…

 

Abir: Bhabhi u r elder to me, in that sense I m ur brother like, so brother should help his sister na… Nt smiles at his sweet talk while dev was shocked with his wife’s smile, she never shared any deep relation with her own family and here an unknown person is making her sister..

 

Saanjh: motu tu rehne de, I will do it…

 

Maan couldn’t digest anything, he looked at geet who was in same state, her face was showing mix emotion, happy to meet her family and spending time with frnds but sad to leave him, he coughed to get her attention and she looked at him, he made baby face but she was helpless.. it was his plan to get married again.. due to ritual they have to be spate for 4 days…

 

Shiv greeted his teeth seeing abir happily smiling at them, he is indeed happy to burst the dream bubble of the 4… saanjh’s face was sad as well, shiv saw her sadness but she was trying to cover it her fake smile…

 

Maan: but if geet will leave how will maahi live without her…

 

Everyone looked at him like he had grown 2 horn.. he saw everyone gaping at him and then abhinash broke in to laughter, dadima and nikita smiles knowing his condition while aniee n nt whistle…

 

Dev: bro maahika will be with bhabhi only na…

 

Maan gave his famous angry look to everyone, he definitely didn’t like the idea of sending his life far…

 

Maan: but we can do the marriage here na?

 

Dadima: maan last time the marriage took place at our temple but this time I think geet’s parents has the right to fulfill their dream…. Maan saw geet face, she indeed want a wedding in her own house. He agreed grumpily and left the dinner table… shiv gave a look to geet ‘its because of abir’ and then he too left the place…

 

Aniee: ye lo, abb inhe kya huya

 

Abir: mirchi lagi… he said while pushing one more bite in his mouth while smiling… saanjh gave him disapproving look, he just ignored, but geet was worried for maan… she excused herself and ran towards their room….

 

 

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As geet entered the room, she saw the most serene scene, a small smile crept on her lips but her heart pained to see how maan was clutching maahika.. he never thought they have to separate for this occasion.. for the world he is the most ruthless businessman but for her he is just like a baby… maan was holding maahika and patting her to sleep. Maahika was peacefully sleeping on his chest like she got the most peaceful place…

 

She went close to them and placed her hand on his back, the look said how much he is feeling helpless…

 

Geet: maan…

 

Maan: Geet don’t go na, how will I live without u and maahi… I can’t live without u two, don’t go please…

 

Geet: u wanted this marriage,, and we have to go by custom then?

 

Maan: then I will come to ur house.

 

Geet whined: maan…

 

Maan: u know angel can’t stay without dadda then why u r trying?

 

Geet: maan its just matter of 4 day, and she will be fine…

 

Maan raises his eyes brow: r u sure?

 

Geet: hmm,, there is everyone, and in the function she will be happy, anyway u will be busy in office…

 

Maan: geet I m warning u if I hear my angel cried for me I swear next day u n she will be here in this room…

 

Geet: accha possessive dadda dekhte hain kon kaha jata hain…

 

Maan: Geettt,,,

 

Geet giggle,, he kissed maahika’s chubby cheek

 

Maan: jana zaruri hain kya?

 

Geet: hmmm as per the ritual u can’t see me before mahendi…

 

Maan: gosh its on the 3rd day. How will I live without u n angel…

 

Geet: u will be fine, shiv bhi hoga na…

 

Maan murmured: ussi ka darr hain….

 

Geet: hmm kuch kaha?

 

Maan: no, I, wo, I will miss angel…

 

Geet: hawww miss angel only not her mumma? U r so mean maan, chalo hatto,, I will talk to u, even don’t see ur face…. rehlo mere beigar…

 

Maan pulls her hand and she came directly on his chest, she saw maahi snuggling close to her dadda…

 

Maan: soch lo geet, u n angel also can’t live without me…

 

Geet: huh dekhte hain…

 

Maan: dekh lena..

 

Geet made faces and tried to take maahika but being dadda’s girl she held his neck tightly…

 

Geet: ye bhi dal badlu hain, huh ja apna dadda ke pass,, mumma ki kya zarurat hain… she went to bed taking her place and soon maan n maahi join her on the bed snuggling close to her… after much fighting she gave up and took maahi close to her then snuggle to his chest… maan smiles at her antics then engulfed both the angel of his life….

 

 

Precap: Maahi back in action, will she do anything to get her dadda??

 

Tell me honestly guys do u think the track is boring? Then tell me, I will give some twist turn to make the ff spicy; I don’t want to make u guys bore with my stories…

 

 

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13 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by laksh on January 21, 2013 at 6:25 pm

    Nice tich. Won’t mind if u give twists too. But current track is good going ..who said its boring yaar? Update soon. This shiv I like a lot nowadays. give him few more scenes.

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  2. Posted by angelickushi on January 21, 2013 at 6:26 pm

    loved the update….
    oh no ab maan kya karega ab dono ko bagair..i think little bit light moment is best bahut saare jhatke diya hain..i wnat their marriage to b comp without any jhatkas but chote mote rootna manana chalega…
    i want to c how maahi is gonna make her dada come to her in this 4 days

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  3. Posted by jannat4eva on January 21, 2013 at 8:17 pm

    ❤Superb update dear….loved it soooo much….waiting for next part❤❤❤

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  4. Posted by trs1391 on January 21, 2013 at 11:36 pm

    shiv jealusy increasing abir talk about geet sanjh and mahika going to parents house maan possessive

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  5. Tich Mg muje iss track main thoda maza nhi arha… 😦
    but its ok with it as i m JUST enjoying J track in two Shiv & Maan , arey Mahika also J & angry yr… 😉

    Lo hogaya kam re-marriage k chakkar main ritual separation… chalo chalo ye dekhne main maza ayega as KON IS K BAGER Nahi rehta =D

    Mahika surly create big hungama for her dada…. hehehe.. such a cutie pie.. 🙂

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  6. Aww lovely update dear..uff yeh maan bhi na abhir ko dekhke jealous feel ho raha hai aur shiv bhi….haayee loved the both cutie pies who are feeling jealous for their girls.Abhir is getting all the attention and maan is no way leaving geet romancing in front of everyone…. 😉 uff geet is getting angry seeing maan like this and abhir is giving teasing smirk….lovely update sweety ab mahi toh dada ka princess haina unka mood toh kab kya hota hai pata nahin…. 😉 ab abhir ke saath devil ki tarah hi pesh aayegi na….loved the update sooooooooooooo much dear OMG ab maan is gonna miss his two angels due to marriage and abhir had come there to take geet and sanjh back maayka for maaneet’s wedding.Continue soon dear loved the update to the core…. 😀 ❤

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  7. beautiful update
    loved possessive maan
    cont soon dear

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  8. Posted by tanvi nangia on January 22, 2013 at 11:52 am

    I just love this track….2thumbs up ticha gr8 going no need to change this track…m literally dancing bcoz u fulfilled my wish if seeing maan jelous without my saying

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  9. Posted by tanvi nangia on January 22, 2013 at 12:22 pm

    Even majority says this track is superbly awesum ♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥

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  10. so so so sweet and lovely update . so much relaxed cute romance between maan and geet loved possessive shiv

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  11. Posted by niki on January 24, 2013 at 12:50 pm

    oh no di.this track is vry much entertaining.i think maahi will do anything to stay wit her dadda.i’m damn sure.love it didu

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  12. Posted by Rajshree Bansode on January 27, 2013 at 4:35 am

    Awesome update di…
    Poor Maan…how will he live without them??
    Now what will Maahi do as her Dadda will not be with her???

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  13. Posted by Tanvi Nangia on January 29, 2013 at 6:48 pm

    MSK’s both angels are angry on him hehehehe
    Shiv jelous hope business mei kuch locha na maarde tension k maare
    yuppiiieeee……….
    Maahika didn’t liked Abir much LOL
    poor he Maahi ne uski shirt b wet krdi
    i wonder agr Maahi ko Abir se attachment hoti toh MSK aur Shiv uska kya haal krte
    Ahemmmm…naughty maan calling geet to their room with new new excuses…
    awwww….
    poor MSK khud ko rok raha hai hehehe
    and Geet getting irritate with his withdrawing
    but he is correct on his place as he is worried for Geet
    i am thinking now we will only get AhemmmmAhemmm in Maaneet’s SR
    (aftr their remarriage re SR bhi toh hogi)
    Geet scared to lose Maan…i hope sam will nt do anything disasterous..*fingers crossed*
    hahahahahahaha…
    love the way Shiv taunted abir 4 Staying in Maaneet’s house…dharamshala LOL
    ahemmmmmmmmmmmm….
    Jelous MSK that too with capital J
    ooopppsssssssssssiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee….
    now GEET in her Mayka and MSK alone in KM without his Mishty and Angel
    love the way u showed MSK’s possesiveness towards maahii…
    must say u show him as a perfect father figure…
    u fulfilled my dream of seeing MSK as a dad by ur writing spirits
    *HATS OFFF*
    awwwiiieee…
    he so much sad to let go his wify and baby away from him be that for 3-4 daysss..
    hmmmm…i knw MSK will bring them back as i knw Maahi will surely gonna cry 4 his dad…
    maahi cringing to her dadda…Geet k paas b nhi aayi hehehehe…
    sweet moments…
    lovely updateeee…
    i am loving this track as it was wish to see Jelous MSK
    i m loving the way u r depicting each and everything…
    now hoping 4 a grand wedding celebration on Maaneet’s first wedding anniversary…
    precap…………
    yiiippppppppiiiiiieeeeeee Maahi back in action i pity on them who will try to calm her down without her dadda being around
    waiting 4 next eagrly….

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