Kurbaan Tere Ishq Mein Part 28

 

Good news or bad but I m CLOSING this ff very soon… don’t know how many part I will take, may be 10  or less than that. but this ff will surely end in right way… promise not to give abrupt ending… I have lost interest in this ff seeing so less response which is the reason to take such decision… but with it I taking few twist in this story which I never planned, the way I had planned the story lost long back.. so its better to give a twist before ending it.. it will be tich’s special twist 😉

 

 

Part 28

 

Geet: maan what they want from us, why we? I can’t let them snatch u.. no no not like this.. we have to runaway maan please…

Seeing her so much in anger and panic he lost the track to do. He cupped her face bringing her close to him, he tried to shut her blabbering but she was in too much shock.. without any warning maan smooched her lips softly. She was surprised with his action, she looked at his eyes complainingly.. a drop of tear rolled down from her almond eyes. he immediately sucked it… geet hugged him hiding her face in the crook of his neck.

 

Geet: maan they will steal u from me. I don’t want to lose u. wo main no wo,,

 

Maan: shh shhh geet, please chup hojayo, nothing will happen jaan. No one can apart us. Relax jaan.

 

Geet: didn’t u hear them, they want to marry u with that bi***.

 

Maan smiles and cupped her face: nobody has the right to crave the name with MSK, its only his Geet’s right. and nobody can take my geet away from me, Geet sirf maan ki hain aur rahegi…. Samjhi… geet nodded with baby face and again cuddled close to his chest… just then they heard some chaos. Both looked from the small window. And it was maan’s turn to be shock. They were arranging the marriage for him and that girl?

 

‘Ohh fish’ maan muttered under his breath, geet gave him deathly glare,, her look clearly said ‘I-have-told-but-u!!!!!!’

Maan: abb kya kare?

 

Geet gave an angry glare: run.

 

Maan: no

 

Geet: yes.

 

Maan: geet we can make them understand.

 

Geet: yeah, and after that they will marry off u with that dumb head gal.

 

Maan: geet listen to me, running its not the solution…

 

It was making geet frustrated, she held his collar and jerks him…

 

Geet: if it would have happened with me? if they were trying to marry me with their ppl? If they had said those words what would have u done till now maan? bolo mujhe? Kisi aur ka hone dete mujhe?

 

Geet shouted on him, the mere word only made him mad in rage, he held her shoulder tight, then pulls her close to him…

 

Maan: shut up geet, how could u said those words huh? U r and will be mine only…

 

Geet: jab tumhe sirf sunke aisa feel huya, think about me damit. How could u think I will be calm hearing all this and seeing with my eyes. that damn ppl aren’t believing us, what do u want us to do. Sit here and wait for them to marry u off to their girl?

 

Maan rubbed his temple in frustration.. he saw some ppl coming towards their room, he sighed and held her hand.

 

Maan: ready to run?

 

Geet: huh?

 

And next they both rushed out from the back door which was tore by maan as the room was made by cloth… they ran like never before, all ppl were busy in preparation so they couldn’t think what was happening. It was then they noticed maaneet’s running when few girl shouted saying they were running out… Both ran in the deep forest which was unknown to them but very well knew to the tribal ppl… few ran behind them and somewhere caught hold of geet… she looked behind to see one man holding her hand… maan felt the pull and immediately kicked him on his stomach… maan held geet by waist and again pulls her in his embrace… then again started running….

 

 

 

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Flashback of heer’s situation…

 

Heer looked at the scene petrified, Prem was hiding her behind his back… her eyes were clearly showing how much terrified she is….

 

Prem: Heer don’t worry, no one will touch u, I promise.

 

Heer: they will harm u.

 

Prem smiles a little feeling her hold him tightly: hmm but they will not touch u…

 

Heer: after killing u they will harm me u idiot… she said in a hush tone.. prem shook his head on her remark. Bilkul MSK ki bahen hain… in the mean time one goon attacked prem with a rod. He held it with his hand and kicked on his shoulder to lose the hold… next came 2 goons together.. prem kicked them spinning around his leg… the 1st man somehow regained his conscious and held heer, she tried to slap him but he was much stronger than her petite form, he started dragging her out from there. prem came there breaking the bone of the man..

 

Prem beat the 3 goon but soon there more men were coming, so heer thought an idea and held prem’s hand…

 

Prem: heer let me handle..

 

Heer: Chup, Bilkul Chup…. Prem’s eyes popped out seeing her tearing the dupatta then tying his head which was bleeding… don’t act like a typical hero, they are trained and more in number, we have to run away from here. we have to go out from the jungle first…

 

They both hold their hand and ran in south direction….

 

Heer: how u came here?

 

Prem: tumhara picha kar raha tha..

 

Heer felt irritated, if he wasn’t the man who saved her life she would have smashed his head… erm could she do that. prem flashed his full toothy smile… heer smacked her head and ran in a fast space…

 

Prem: I m not good in running… slow down…

 

Heer: but I m under state champion, mujhe ishq ladana hain to mujhe chase karna sikhlo..

 

Prem: ok baba sikh lunga..

 

Prem for a moment stopped in his track hearing her words, heer shook her head and stopped in front of him…

 

Heer: ruk kyun gaye?

 

Prem: what did u said, pyar, ishq??

 

Heer: u r an idiot who took so much time to say it,, and I was thinking u r some psycho so I always got frighten seeing u.. main to soch rahi thi bhai ko bata du, accha huya nahi bataya, warna koi haddi nahi bachti aaj mujhe bachane k liye…

 

Prem: but do u? I mean r u?

 

Heer: arrgghh why u take so much time to complete one sentence, we don’t have the world’s time. if the goon catch us, u would probably have 5 min to see me.. so lets run fast…

 

Prem: one question pls….

 

Heer: bhaagte bhaagte puchna, challooo,, they both ran again… prem somehow catching his breath asked his question.

 

Prem: but what made ur decision change that I m lover not a psycho?

 

Heer stopped for a moment, prem too stopped and heaved up for a moment..

 

Heer: because no psycho can love a person so much that he can sacrifice his life for her… prem smiles cutely, he wanted to hug her but heer shoved him… Ye sab bhai se baat karne k baad. Prem pouted and heer dragged him again running…  after few min of running they hide behind a bush… prem how come u here?

 

Prem: bola na picha kar raha tha.

 

Heer: stupid, how u came, car? Bike? cycle? Rikshaw anything??

 

Prem: I have my car.

 

Heer’s face brighten up: where is ur car then?

 

Prem: a little away from highway, we can reach there by running in this pace.

 

Heer: to abhi tak kyun nahi bola tha duffer..

 

Prem: heer,, we met for few hour and u have given all sort of names, mind ur tongue yaar….

 

Heer chuckle: mere sath zindegi bitana hain to adat daal lo….

 

They again ran towards prem’s car…

 

 

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Geet felt exhausted with the running so she sat on a rock behind a tree. Maan sat in front of her..

 

Maan: mishty a little more, please..

 

Geet: maan we are running for an hour, I can’t run more, give me few min pls…

 

Maan saw her face was pale: okay will u sit here for a moment. I will go and search some water… he was going where geet held his hand.

 

Geet: no maan please, wait I m come…

 

Maan: u r looking pale.

 

Geet: I m ok…

 

Geet again dragged her body with him.. they saw a small pond.. geet sat beside the riverbank, maan took some water and made her sip from his hand.. geet felt really weak, she leaned on his chest placing her head on his chest… maan patted her head and looked here n there… he saw a car’s sound.. he looked keenly and there was highway…

 

Maan: mishty, mishty get up, we got our way…

 

Both stood up to go but their destiny stopped as they felt trapped… all tribal ppl circled them… they saw suraj who’s face was grim…

 

Maan: suraj u can’t do this, hume jaane do suraj…

 

Suraj: apne aisa kyun kiya maan, humne aapko apna bhai samjha tha.

 

Geet: agar samjhte to yakeen karte.. look main tm logo ko maan ko nahi lejane dungi… do whatever u want…

 

As they wanted to break the trap someone came in front and showed a sharp knife making geet cringed to maan…

 

Person: is larki k liye agar tum shaadi nahi kar sakte hum isse hi maar denge fir.. he tried to throw the knife at geet but maan came between so it slits maan’s arm… he hissed in pain and geet shouted his name..

 

Geet: Maannnnn…..

 

From nowhere few more men came but they were in black uniform… they were rounak’s men… maan aw geet’s frighten face then at those special guards… tribal ppl saw maan hugging gee hiding her from everyone…

 

One guard: give them to us, he spoke in perfect English accent…

 

Geet: special guard,, hum kaise bachenge maan. she whispered… maan himself wasn’t sure how they will survive now, but he knew his geet have to be safe…

 

Maan: suraj tum agar chahte ho main uss larki ko shaadi karu to meri geet ki raksha karna.. usse lejao yaha se, aur aisi jagah jaha wo safe ho…

 

Geet’s hold on his loosen as she looked at him with wide eyes…

 

Maan; I m sorry, he whispered and pushed her towards suraj.. who was dumbfounded with the new scene and so was the tribal ppls, they never saw such love of course…

 

Maan got rid of his shirt and stood before those commandos…

 

Maan: le jao usse suraj, mera wadah raha ye zindegi tumhare naam… bas meri geet ko safe rakhna… geet was statue with all that… she felt some touch but couldn’t recognized as her mind was too busy with maan’s thought how can he do this.

 

Those numerous commandos came one by one and maan kicked them hard,, he was rough while beating them black n blue, few tribal ppl also helped him but those commandos knew martial arts and other way of fights… still maan beat them till he felt his breath shallow as someone hit him with a rod. Maan held his head feeling the cold blood gushing down his neck…

 

Geet stopped numbly on her way, everyone looked at her as she looked back, they were littleaway from the place…

 

Geet: I can’t leave him.. aise jeeke kya karungi jisme maan nahi hoga…

 

Suraj: hamare log hain unke stah aap chaliye.

 

Geet: wo usse maar dalenge, wo bhi mere liye. Wo mere piche hain maan k nahi… they will kill him…

 

Suraj: magar…

 

Geet snapped her hand and ran towards maan where they were beating him…

 

Geet: maannnnn…. She shouted grabbing everyone’s attention….

 

The goons turned to get her but  suraj came between.

 

Suraj: humne maan se wadah kiya hain unki geet ko bachayenge…

 

Geet looked at him with gratitude, but next suraj felt the weight on him of the man was gone… geet was in her position of her martial art… she was trained in it, and no emotion can stop her in this path… she knocked out few who were beating maan, again a man tried to hit her from back, this time it was held by maan himself.. he gets his conscious seeing his mishty fighting for him. a small smile spread his lips remembering the small mishty who loved to fight with him today she is fighting for him…. but in few second someone tried to smack her head with a wood.. he immediately held that man’s hand and broke the bone…

 

 

In the mean time that girl came to suraj, she said whatever she said for maan was all wrong,, she was forced to do so cause her lover who is suraj’s brother pressurized her to say that… today seeing the love of maaneet she got to know what is real love.. suraj felt ashamed… his brother gave apologetic look but he said he will handle all later,, he informed his all ppl on the place and they came with all kind of secret weapon they use…

 

Geet saw maan limping while fighting, she held him and tried to drag him out.. but maan saw someone pointing a gun towards suraj. He immediately pushed suraj saving him, but himself injured his side waist….  Suraj felt guilty with his behavior towards the man who saved him today…

 

Suraj: hume maaf kar dijiye maan… humne..

 

Maan: tumne meri geet ko safe rakkha, uske samne ye kuch bhi nahi…

 

Suraj gulped the lump in his throat then looked at geet: aap dono yaha se nikal jayiye hum sab sambhal lenge, ye bohot sare hain. aap ko hamare sathi yaha se bahar poucha denge…

 

A small boy age of 10 12 came running towards them, he held geet and maan’s hand… maaneet hugged suraj and bid him bye… they went out without making anyone notice and suraj’s men involved all the guard in a big fight….

 

After reaching the highway the boy ran inside the forest to his ppl,, geet silently thank god and both started walking speedily.. but soon maan’s body gave up.. his limping body fell on the ground… geet cried holding him.. probably first time she is feeling so much scare, she patted his face to gain his conscious..

 

Geet: maan please, don’t sleep, don’t sleep, please. Kuch nahi hoga.. kuch der aur, pls… her voice was shaking seeing him losing his conscious..

 

Maan somehow manages to open his lips: mishty run, run away, jaan.

 

Geet: no.. no, tum samajhte kya ho apne aapko.. ek sath jeeyenge warna nahi.. u have to live if u want me to live.. common get up..

 

Maan: I, I can’t. pls… jao, go….

 

Geet leaned don his lips kissing it little: u said u will be always with me then? get up.. how will I go alone… they will come again.. utho maan pls…

 

Maan: I , I can-can’t mish-mishty

 

Geet: u know u r quite heavy,,, I can’t carry u.. Pl-please get up… she cried holding his face between her palm and kissing his forehead… she saw few car passing,, she ran towards them but no one came to help them… she never felt so much helpless in her life.. her dress was drenched in blood but she least cared… she only care of her love… she again held maan, placed his head on her lap trying to wake him up….

 

Just then she felt someone standing beside her, she looked up to see who was the man.

 

Geet: help us please. She cried looking at the man who seems to be a good man. He and his driver took maan in the back seat and geet sat beside him placing his head on her lap… in the journey she only held his hand rubbing it and waking him… she cried n cried still never left his hand… the man saw their love through the mirror view.. He saw maan’s face.. a ting of pain shuddered him, and he shouted on the poor driver to drive the car fast….

 

Man: beta, usse kuch nahi hoga… we have reached Mumbai,, don’t worry…

 

Geet : thank u thank u so much mr,

 

Man: Abhinav Singh Khurana… geet looked at him numbly.. she saw maan and then the man…

 

 

Precap: well twist has entered already. Lets see what happen…

 

 

 

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5 responses to this post.

  1. kia mast update thi…
    i really enjoyed,, itni jaldi kia hai END karne ki….
    tm update deti tehna main feedback deti rahongi 😉
    ye to koi na baat hui.. 😦
    bas MUJE KURBAAN TERE ISHQ MEIN continue chaye…

    Haye kitna bhagam bhaag thi.. ek tarf Heer prem aur dosri tarf Maaneet…
    chalo sach samne agaya… warna to shadi pakki thi 😛

    suraj help, geet fight for her love life,,, CUTE na..
    heer ki baatein to tauba hai.. kitna KAM boltihai 😛
    prem ki to bolti band kardi.. bechara.. 😀

    Abhinav Singh Khurana… TWIST ki smell aying muje… 😛
    Maan Singh Khurana se kia taluoq hai inka???

    Ufff ab ek lamba WAIT…
    tich jaldi do na…

    Reply

  2. Posted by suzie on January 29, 2013 at 11:07 pm

    simply fabulous update
    thanks sweety
    pls can yu update
    love for yu

    Reply

  3. awesome dear
    loved it

    Reply

  4. Posted by kanwal on April 11, 2013 at 9:11 am

    Good work, please continue soon, waiting, x

    Reply

  5. waiting for next update

    Reply

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