A Walk in a Cloud Last Part

Last Part, u can think it as epilogue…

 

 

Morning sun light brought the new zeal of love n happiness for everyone, but does the same with Geet and Maan? same question must be lingering in geet’s mind when she found her side empty… a ting of pain gush through her when she saw maan wasn’t there. she sighed knowing he must have left for office.. in all these year she can only hope for this, every morning she dreamt to be in his arm but woke up alone, she looked at the clock, showing 7 am. She couldn’t she sleep so much,, she should have woken at 6 to give him a nice breakfast, he must have left empty stomach… she cursed herself and tried to get up from the comfy duvet but soon realized she is naked… whole night came crushing down, she had barely slept for 2 hour, the passion she felt last night it was magical.. her face become red in shy but soon maan’s thought crushed down her shyness… Maan didn’t get an eyes sleep, how will he feel in his meeting then… she tried to take the scatter cloth from the floor but the scene in front of her froze her…

She looked up to see maan coming from washroom dripping wet, he still has the abs she can die for, his structure is same like 18 yrs before but it had grown muscling more… the water from his wet hair dropped down to his neck then his shoulder… Geet felt her throat went dry seeing him like that. there are very few days she had seen him like this. He was always busy in his routine so she couldn’t have the pleasurable view every morning….

Their eyes met, she felt something crunching in her stomach, His wet desirable look was intoxicating.. she felt her heart shudder violently, and before it can burst she need to rush out from here… Maan saw the morning beauty,, smudge sindoor n swollen lips, her eyes were red saying the lack of sleep, hair messy and the duvet covering her womanly asset giving a clear view of her milky white skin of her chest n shoulder. He saw the admiration in her eyes that he missed all this years. He was always busy in his business but never miss the beauty of her serene face and that’s why whenever he went for meeting and work early morning he never miss the chance to admire her morning beauty silently.. he would kiss her forehead before leaving and the kiss would be so fragile to recognize..

Today seeing her like this made him hard instantly, but guilt was visible in his eyes, seeing her shaking hand to collect her cloths and trying to wear it fast make him feel her loneliness that she felt in his absences… she was tying the knot with the duvet around her chest when he held her hand, she felt goosebumps all over her body. She dare not look at him, knowing she will be paralyzed with the dark look in his eyes…

Geet: wo, main, main, I, I will ready the breakfast. U must be leaving for work, I, I don’t know how I slept till this late. Bacche bhi school k liye late honge.. mujhe jana chhaiye.. I,,

Maan kept his index finger on her lips shutting her blabbering…

Maan: today is Sunday, baccho ka school nahi hain,, geet blinked her eyes looking at him and nodding…. Maan removed his finger from the soft petal controlling himself… but next second his heart slits…

Geet: but u will be going after some hour, I should make the breakfast so that u can have it before leaving for work, apka Sunday bhi to kaam hi hota hain…

She tried to walk away thinking what to make in breakfast when he held her hand from behind… she turned to look at him with confuse face.. but her heart pained to see the hurt and pain his in his eyes…

Maan: Mishty,, I m, M sorry… she was confuse why he was saying sorry and that was clearly visible in her eyes. in his insecurity he forgot she must have needed his warmth and security of love.. which has now left her heart. She doesn’t wish or expect anything now. Her life revolve around him and her children. He remembers her words of last night. She will carry this till her breath gave up… he felt choked with emotion and hugged her.. she was confuse with his sudden act.. no love no care can erase the emptiness from her heart.. it need time to heal those 16 yrs of loneliness, her expectation has died with time and thousand word of his can never fill the place now so easily.. it need time, warmth, love and protection of his arm… she didn’t understand his act but didn’t questioned him. she never did… she only held him tight consoling his pain. Again she only thought about him.. where is she in all this??

Geet: Maan what happen? Did I said anything? I m sorry, main to bas,,

Maan: shhhhh,, I m sorry for all this geet.. will u do something for me?? she nodded still hugging him… He caresses her head. Then please stay in my arms like this for sometime…

Geet: but ur meeting.

Maan: from now only u n kids will be my priority. Nothing else.

Geet: no maan.. she broke the hug and saw the guilt in his eyes, she cupped his face.. I don’t want to be a throne in ur path… I know with how much difficulty u had raised this company. Its ur dream… and I don’t want to shatter it.. I and children will be always be with u.. Whenever u come back to home we will be here for u…

Maan: yehi to mushkil hain geet. Till now u were behind me like my shadow but I never understood u need to be beside me… now I want u guys to be with me, beside me not as shadow but my soul… I want to live these 16 yrs with u in this small time, will u be with me?

Geet only nodded with tears and a smile… maan captured her lips urgently making her dumbfounded… he kissed her carnally.. like never in life he had touched her like this… he tucked her closer to him making her forget about surrounding… the drop of his hair fell on her shoulder…. And he licked it with his tongue making patterns on her shoulder… she breathed heavily, clutching his shoulder for support and he nibble her skin carnally….  Next she found herself carrying by him to the bed, her duvet was long gone as his huge structure hide her petite form. She blushed like tomato which made his heart a little light next they found themselves pool of passion and love….

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Mumma, Mummaa…

Megha: mohit what happen baby?

Mohit: where is mumma di? Mumma doesn’t sleep so much…

Megha: hmm its 10 and still mom doesn’t come at breakfast table. Nakul kaka said she is tired and will be late.. mom ne aisa kabhi nahi kiya.. sayad kal der se soyi na so must be having headache..

Mohit: should we go to her room to see what she is doing….

Megha: ok, but first finish ur omelet then we will go… mohit nodded his head… and by the way did u finished ur home work…

Mohit gave a cheeky smile which says not yet and megha showed her big angry eyes which frighten the poor mohit….

Mohit: Mummmaaaaa,,, he shouted making megha put her hand on ear…

Megha: mohit k bacche ruk,, mom ko aane de, what will I do then..

Mohit: if mumma comes u will be scared cat in front of her… hahahaha… megha made a grumpy face looking at her 7 yrs old brother who is definitely a replica of her dad, knows his way out….

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Geet opens her eyes to see maan sleeping hiding his face in her neck,, she slowly pulls out her face to see him, his serene calm face made a smile to form on her face, she kept looking at him for a  while and saw her sindoor on his cheek.. she bite her lips hard, then bend down to wipe the mark but maan held her palm shocking her further…

Maan: what r u doing?

Geet: u were not sleeping…

Maan smirks: how can I miss the chance to see my darling wife admiring me… her face become red in embarrassment, he saw her in amusement. She still blush so much.. How could he lose all these year, probably she would blush same in those years but he missed it… he rubbed his thumb on her cheek then her swollen lips… I missed all in these years… will u ever forgive me geet?

Her heart pained to hear so pain from him… she closed his mouth with her palm and rest her head on his chest, he pulls her closer to him. if it possible he would her soaked her in him…

Geet: I can If u promise not to feel guilty over those times… he closed his eyes feeling hot tears rolling down the corner of his eyes, she saw it and licked it then kissed his eyes… U were never at fault, it was just ur ruined childhood which made u feel so… u were never at fault maan.. can we please move on in life??

Maan kissed her forehead: I want to, but this past never leaves haunting me…. will u help me to reduce the pain?? I want to be close with u all my life. The life I missed…..

Geet kissed his lips softly making him widen his eyes: Yes.. we will make out cloud to reach the heaven together… we will walk further together… but please stop feeling guilty over something which was never ur fault….

Maan: but I can’t wipe out the pain I caused u, I can’t bring the smile for u which u would feel with small small things.. u don’t expect anything from me now, then how can I expect anything from myself…

Geet remember what she did few min ago, she mentally smacked herself, he want to relive all these year with her and children but she herself made him feel alone… she cursed herself.

Geet: I m sorry Maan. but I promise from now we will start our life like we started 18 yrs back… maan smiles and hugged her close,, her full body was on top of him… he felt happy hearing his old chirpy Geet…  Geet hesitantly looked at him, she made her heart strong, first time she want something and that too only because of him.. maan sense her reluctance, he made her lie on her back then came on top of her…

Maan: what happen jaan? She felt butterfly hearing the word from him… he was never so expressive…

Geet: Maan wo, actually…

Maan: U said u will expect anything n everything from me now, then what is making u so reluctance? He said looking at her eyes which shows happiness yet worry somewhere.. He traces his thumb on her cheek, her bare curves were teasing him.. he never knew this desire to take her again n again still exist in him so carnally.. he dipped his head in the crook of her neck and rubbing his stubble there making her giggle… it felt musical just like the days when he would admire her antics from far…. Bolo jaan….

Geet: Maan wo,, Children wanted to go somewhere for picnic.. I think, it, will, be gr-great if u,,, I mean if u don’t have much important work then can u,, mera matlab tha…

He felt happy to hear she want him to take them on holiday but hearing her reluctance he also felt the pain, he knew its weird and difficult for her to express something like this to him, she never asked anything then suddenly these talking of course makes her reluctant but she is doing just for him. again she only thinks about him… he kissed her nose cutely….

Maan: anything for u n children….

Her face brighten up hearing that,, she felt she got something very big in life. Maan never saw the glow on her face like this ever… he understood why she was always dull to receive expensive gift from him, she just wanted few memorable time to cherish…. he wanted to cry but couldn’t, he wanted to punish himself but couldn’t cause it will only pain her….

Geet: thank u so much maan. u know bacche sun ke kitne khush honge… it made maan worried.. remembering megha’s word he felt immense hatred in her… his geet always protected him but how will he face his own daughter… Geet saw the hesitant on his face… What happen maan?

Maan: geet do u think megha will forgive me for ruining her childhood, I, I was never a good dad…

Geet: ssshhh maan, u r the best father anyone can have. u did all this just for us… just to give them this life u worked like machine. They loves u…

Maan: geet I m scared.. they must be hating me for ruining the beautiful childhood…

Geet: noooo maan they can never…

Maan: but last night… he closed his eyes remembering last night, geet felt responsible to make him guilty. Maybe she should have handle megha more sensitively…

Geet: I think u should give the news..

Maan was not sure about it but nodded his head: are they woke up already?

Only then geet saw the clock 10:30,,  horror stuck in her as she pushed him from her…

Geet: maan hatto, we have to rush,, bacche uth bhi gaye breakfast bhi kar liya hoga…

Maan saw the time, he was amused to geet in panic: Geet its good na, why r u panicking?

Geet: maan they don’t like food made my servants.. and Mohit, Ohh God he must be running to come here…

And just then they heard the bang…

MUMMAAAA,, MOMMM..

Geet: abb kya hoga,, Maan wear ur cloth fast… maan was too much shock to see her running like that… she wore her nighty and run towards the door but before she can open it maan held her hand… he was dressed in his pants.. he took the shirt and wore it…

Maan: u go first freshen up,, u r looking messy Hot Mom… I will open it…

Geet got a sweet shock hearing him like this, then saw her reflection in mirror indeed she is looking messy, she ran towards the washroom… maan smiled and opened the door… Megha and Mohit stood there frozen on their place…

DAD?? Both whisper… they couldn’t believe he is staying till now, usually maan stays at Sunday till 9 or 10 pm and in afternoon he played with mohit but megha doesn’t come near him.. she doesn’t want to get attach with him knowing he will again leave them for his business specially whenever she saw her mother’s longing face she felt hatred for him.. but last night’s geet words had made a mark. She doesn’t feel hatred towards him knowing how much hardship he had gone through just to give his family a good life.. maan was amazed to see her so silent and peeping inside to see geet but she didn’t said a word to him… Megha is something he felt himself in her, she has His anger, his rudeness and arrogance, but at the same time she has calmness like geet, softness and understanding like geet…

Megha: u here, umm, won’t u go office? She was hesitant but not rude that maan expected to be…

Maan: umm,, come inside first… it was awkward for them as megha never shared closeness with maan, it was always mohit who love to be pampered by maan. and as he is small to all this so he never cared about maan’s timing, for him video games and chocolates,, beautiful cloths and cars were everything and after all this maan spent some time with him as well. though maan tried to be with megha but after age of 10 megha refuse to be close to him…

Megha looked at everywhere to see geet, thank god he had dumped their cloths in the cupboard or else this James Bond would have seen and analyzed everything… she looks so mature from her age..

Megha: umm where is mom? She asked softly… Mohit had already occupied the bed with his zooming car…

Maan: she is in washroom.. she was little tried so sleeping…  he saw her looking everywhere not him, she wanted go out from the room but doesn’t wanted to hurt him… Umm Megha..

Megha: yes?

Maan: do u want to meet ur mom only, can’t we spent some time like a father daughter or atleast buddy?

Megha looked at him surprised, she couldn’t control herself being rude: so that u will distance again from us and I will be alone like mom…

Meghaaaaa… this time geet shouted on her. megha knew geet never liked her talking with maan like that, but its her pain n frustration to not having her dad beside her like every other girl of her age… she looked at maan angrily,, then stomped out from the room…

Geet : I, I m sorry maan, wo megha, meri hi galti hain sab…

Maan: geet why u r cursing urself.. I never gave u guys my time then how can I ask her time for me.. she is right at her place.. her insecurities is also justified….

Geet: but…

Mohit: mom…

Geet: ha?

Mohit: Why this bed is so messy, u don’t like messy things na? geet became red in embarrassment and maan saw that… he smiles mischievously….

Maan: mohit, ur mom was doing boxing on bed last night…

Mohit n geet’s mouth open a O shape…

Mohit: with whom?? He asked in astonishment, geet made a threatening face while maan only smiles…

Maan: with me darling…

Mohit: but how can that be? mom is so fragile and u r so tough, u would have knocked out mom with one punch… he said animatedly…. Maan couldn’t help but laugh while geet made a baby face…

Geet: ye maan bhi na, bacche k samne kuch bhi bolte hain..

Megha heard everything from outside, she was happy to find her father laughing maybe for the first time.. mohit’s antic can make anyone smile and megha was glad geet wasn’t angry or hurt anymore.. but what happened that changed the situation so much…. Megha had noticed from some day that maan was much more concern about geet and them now a days.. before last night also maan use to come early and see geet maybe because she has suffered from viral fever.. only from then megha had observed maan’s love for geet but still last night when he didn’t turned up on his birthday her anger shoot high and she felt he doesn’t love them. was she wrong judging him…

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Geet: kya huya maan? why r u so down?

Maan: I think I should talk to megha.. geet knew it has to come but she wasn’t prepare. What if megha again hurt him….

Geet: but.

Maan: I know what u r worrying about, she has my anger, but calmness she personified u Geet…

Geet nodded with little smile….

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Maan: Can I Sit here? If u don’t mind. He said to megha hesitantly…. She was sitting in the garden looking at the flowers… whenever she feel tense or sad she comes here just like Geet use to come…  Maan sat beside her. both were numb, what to say n how to start.. at last Maan broke the silence…. Hows ur study Going?

Megha: Good. Final exams are Coming.

Maan: I was thinking, Can we, I mean can we start a fresh? I know in these years I haven’t given u n ur mom any happiness but I truly want only happiness for my family…

Megha dipped her head: I know, Mom always tells that.

Maan: so,, umm,, can we?

Megha shrugged her shoulder but kept mum… There was again silence. Maan felt his heart will burst if he doesn’t open up now…

Maan: Megha…. I, I m sor,,,

Megha: Can u Promise me something? Maan looked at her confuse… her eyes were moist,, U won’t leave mom again to sulk in that darkness… She loves u a lot…

Maan: So do i…

Megha: then why u always left her? Why she always so alone? Do u know how pathetic its feel to see ur mom crying for love every day still putting a strong face? she doesn’t need ur money and luxury but she want love, I don’t want to lose my mom, can u promise u will love her like the way she want…. Will u???

By now she broke down and maan hugged her tight.. he himself felt his eyes moist…

Maan: I promise.. I promise Megha I will never leave my family behind,, Please forgive me… I Promise u, I will give my all time n love. I know sometime love need to express. I promise I will show my love for ur mother.. Just give me once chance.. I love u guys a lot…. I can’t live without u guys… don’t leave me megha…

Megha: we love u too dad.. and I need my dad beside me, not his money n status… can I have my dad with me always???

Maan: yes, u will….

Megha: love u dad….

Geet shed happy tears looking at the father daughter duo,, mohit saw them and made a face…

Mohit: they are hugging each other without me.. he made a cry face, but geet kissed his chubby cheek….

Geet: u go and hug them… Mohit’s face brighten up, and he ran towards them. next he jumped on them making megha shriek in horror…

Megha: Mohitttttt….

Mohit: I love u dad… maan smiles and kissed his cheek…

Maan: luv u too beta…

Mohit hugged megha tight by her neck almost choking her: I love u diii…. Megha couldn’t help smile and kissed his cheek… Uff sab mere cheek ke piche kyun padhe ho,, pehle mumma then dad then u… yuckkk.. megha laughed as he know he hates kissy wissy but maan’s eyes stuck on geet who was smiling silently. He mouthed a thank u but geet shook her head in no, he smiles and mouthed I Love You… Geet smiles and mouthed the same… he spread his hand to welcome her.. geet walked up to them and sat beside maan, he slipped his hand around her waist and another hand on megha’s back… mohit sat on his lap fighting with megha as she was kissing his cheek continuously making him irritating…

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Whole day went like any other happy family, geet cooking for her family and maan playing with mohit n megha… he had got many calls from office but he ignored, maybe for the 1st time he thought its not so important. For him his family’s smile is the most precious luxury… it was dinner table where mohit was irritating geet with his nonstop sound…

Mohit: Mummmaaaaaaaa Khana lao,, he was doing many sound with the spoon and plate irritating geet further…

Megha: Mohit shut up, mom is coming na, stop it now….

Mohit: nahhh,, pehle khana lao…

Megha: dad see, he is irritating…. But maan also joined mohit in making sound…. Geet came with food feeling annoyed…

Geet: ye kya maan, u also joining him.. I have only 2 hand not ten… and after preparing all 3 of ur favorite give me atleast 2 min to take my breath…. But no, u both son father are on fire na….

Maan: ok after dinner I will be at ur service, umm how about ur personal massager? Megha and geet’s eyes popped out hearing maan’s teasing tone and romantic words. Though he showed he was teasing but his look said all to geet and her face become bright red.. for megha it was the first time she was seeing her parent’s romantic tease so openly… and geet’s red face was cherry on cake. Geet saw megha’s eyes were on them, she knotted her eyes but megha shrugged off…

Geet was serving the food when maan held her hand, geet was startle with the sudden movement from maan… but he made her sit beside him….

Maan: I have lost those years, but I can’t miss the chance to have dinner with my family anymore. I want  to eat sitting beside u geet, and u can serve like this. I can help u…. Geet felt his pain in those words…. Megha too realized her dad had craved for love too, she being the responsible child took the bowl of curry from geet’s hand and help herself by serving it…

Dinner was full of teasing and cribbing, geet often blush with maan’s intense gaze and maan often would admire her openly, he felt blessed to have geet for him… after dinner kids were going in their room when maan stopped them…

Maan: Megha Mohit…. I have a news for u…

Megha: yeah dad, what news?

Maan: umm I m thinking if u guys r ok, can we go,,,, umm for a vacation? He said quite hesitantly, he doesn’t knew how will be the reaction of them, after so many years he actually thinking about his family and a vacation… megha and mohit gaped at maan with open mouth… geet chuckle seeing them but maan was nervous. What if they deny, when he never gave his time to them will they give him the chance to live in a family like a family person… but to his surprise both kids ran and hugged him… he smiled and hugged them tightly… his eyes were moist as he kissed both their forehead.. her saw geet’s smiling face, she quickly removed the tears but that doesn’t go unnoticed by maan….

Megha: I m so happy dad…

Mohit: where will we go??

Maan: where do u want to go?

Mohit made faces, he doesn’t know much about holiday and geet megha laughed at his cute faces… maan made him sit on his lap… mohit made cute sady face.. maan kissed his cheeks..

Maan: Disneyworld chale??

Megha n mohit’s eyes twinkle as it was their dream to go there… megha hugged him saying ‘I love u Dad’.. maybe for the first time maan heard it, he saw geet looking at him nodding a no, he smile wiping his tears without making megha or mohit notice…. He kissed his kids numerous time…. they were really excited about it… but suddenly megha looked at him…

Megha: dad, won’t ur business suffer because of it, and will u ever be able to go with us? I mean wo,,

Maan’s heart pained to see his daughter’s expecting and painful eyes, he knew he need to do a lot to make them believe he want to live this life with them.. the late night event had made him scared for the first time… and he doesn’t want to lose his family…

Maan: I know baccha I never showed that I want to live with happiness that my family can give me only but I m truly trying to be family man, and I need my family’s help.. will u help ur dad…

Megha smiles: of course dad… ok lets finalize the date of vacation, I have off after 2 weeks and mohit also have holiday after 10 days,, so we are free then, now u tell when u can adjust….

Maan: whenever u want… megha’s jaw fell on the ground, but geet closed it…

Geet: if ur dad said he will be a family man now then he have to adjust according to u not u will adjust according to him, samjhi… she said with attitude making maan crunch his eye brow and mohit giggle…

Mohit: yeshh,,, mumma is the best.. mumma u tell the date…

Maan: idhar aaja mumma ke bacche, but mohit ran away from him, and maan started chasing him…. geet and megha sat back and saw the beautiful scene…. Suddenly maan’s phn buzzed, maan was holding mohit so he told geet to take the call and switch it’s speaker… geet did so…

Aadi: he-hellooo sirrrr,,

Megha giggle hearing his fumbling but geet eyed her to shut her mouth which megha obliged immediately….

Geet: hello aadi, this is geet, maan is little busy but he is hearing u so tell the purpose of ur call without fear…

Aadi: he-he-he-he thank u Mam….

Maan: get in the work aadi, he said sternly… mohit n megha was frighten with the stern voice as they never heard him like this neither geet. But He was always rude to office where he tried to be calm in home always… geet pressed megha’s hand then maan sat beside her rubbing her back n holding mohit with another hand close to his heart… Aadi tell me why u called at this hour…

Aadi: wo, sir, u didn’t showed up in office, I called u numerous time, sasha also tried but u were unavailable..

Maan: when I was unavailable that mean I was busy, now cut the crap and tell why u called here?

Aadi: sir sasha handled today’s meeting but we need u tom early,, My Richard want to meet u tom at 8 am before catching his flight and then Miss Angelina have an appointment at 11 am… I called u to remind about the business party also…

Maan saw geet’s face turned pale, the fear of losing him was back, and megha held geet’s hand tightly who gave a small smile to her but tried to move from there.. maan held her hand in his….

Maan: Aadi cancel my all meeting tom, I want to spend my day with my family… geet missed a beat hearing his words and aadi’s phn was almost slipping hearing his workaholic boss’s words.. he looked at the num to confirm its maan’s num and then fumble…

Aadi: je je jeje sirrrrr????

Maan: u heard me right aadi, I have wasted my whole life and earn enough money, but now I want to live this life.. Cancel all meeting for tom and book 4 tickets for Disney World….

Aadi smiles broadly, maybe he is only an employee but he was also worried for maan as he never thought about day n night, family n friends. He is working from the tender age of 20… 18 yrs no stop he had been working… he need break and specially when he is with his family, finally he recognized the love of a family.. he without any argue nodded…

Aadi: right sir… probably first time he said something without fumbling….

Mohit hugged maan: I love u dad… megha too joined the hug saying the same words..

Maan: I love u too… he kissed them one by one, but his eyes were on geet who was smiling and shedding the last bit of tears away… he mouthed a ‘love you’. She blushed and turned other side…

Their happy family night got disturb as aniee called them complaining they forgot her birthday,, geet mentally smacked her head forgetting aniee’s birthday. Maan and aniee share their birthday on same day and no other present can make aniee happy the way today she felt happy,, maan made a video conference with family.. aniee shed happy tears and she is truly happy to see finally his brother breaking the glass around him and engulfing happiness….

Kids retired their room and maan picked geet in his arms who widen her eyes…

Geet: Maan kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: kuch bhi to nahi..

Geet: maan put me down na please, bacche dekh lenge…

Maan: they have gone for sleep and now u r all mine… I don’t have to share u with them…

Geet whined; maannnnn….

Maan: ok first give me my birthday gift…

Geet: hawwww,, itna sab to kiya aur kya chahiye??

Maan: I tell u what I want, they entered the room and he kicked the door with his leg… her face feels hot as red hue covered it.. she held him tightly..

Geet moans: Maan…

Maan: I haven’t did anything yet jaan. He said huskily rather sensuously.. he placed her on the bed every so gently then covered her body with him… I want my gift as YOU… promise me u will hold me walking in the cloud of our heaven, never leave me alone to lost in the darkness… promise me u will demand and accept anything n everything from me as a part of me… promise to be with me till this eternity last forever… Promise me Geet….

She kissed his lips every so softly with a soft ‘YES’

Geet: I promise u I will be a part of u and accept anything n everything frm u,, we will walk together in the clouds of our heaven… I will never leave u maan, never again….

Never thought A Walk in a Cloud will bind Us together Again to have a journey Next time Together….

The End….

I want to give the credit of the name of this ff to SAM, who is the actual finder of this name, I thought to give another tough name but she suggested me it… LOVE U SAMY a lotttttttttttttttt…. Thanks nahi bolungi I don’t want to get chappal from her but I truly love u sam… muahhh

This ff will be always very special to me cause I felt relate to this story. I tried something different and REAL hope I have accomplished my dream of writing something Real n natural…. This type of story we have in every other house but no one knew the turmoil behind the happy faces… don’t judge anyone’s happiness from face see the eyes which show pain seeing ur small world of happiness… cause they also want love not luxurious life….

If u ever read this story do let me know how u felt, I want to know ur feeling towards this story, no matter how many story I write but emotionally this story will be close to my heart….

© All Copy Rights Reserved 2013. Tich Mg.

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7 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by trs1391 on February 5, 2013 at 1:53 am

    superb

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  2. Posted by Rajshree Bansode on February 5, 2013 at 4:00 am

    Love u Tich di…
    What a lovely end…
    Every word of the update was depicting their longing for each other…
    Megha is such a caring & responsible child..
    All she wanted from her dad was only love & time of her dad for her mom who had suffered every min from last 16 yrs…
    & Mohit is such a cutieeee pie…
    Loved the bonding of Megha & Mohit..
    Awesome writing di…

    Loved it a lloootttt…

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  3. Posted by ushankitvc on February 5, 2013 at 7:12 am

    awesumly fabulously funtabulous story…read all in one go…really bought tears into my eyes…i jst luved this story of urs and the title jst a cherry on the top of my fav butter scotch flavoured cake…its so mindblowingly superb…thanx fr giving us such a beautiful story…

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  4. superb
    loved it a lot

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  5. Posted by raty on February 6, 2013 at 10:24 pm

    awww such a beautiful last part maan megha patch up was superb love every single point maan cancel his meeting happy family or maaneet pyar awsome os

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  6. thanks a lotttttt guys for ur comments…..

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  7. I just read the whole story… it was beautiful !!!
    i mean it was so true…. a harsh reality behind some true love stories…
    It happens so much in real life….
    You get married to a person u love so much… but then usually after marriage, responsibility increases on both guy and the girl…. Just that the girl’s responsibilities are more towards the family and caring part whereas the guy solely concentrates on the financial background… In becoming responsible and trying to fulfill the materialistic requirement, sometimes ppl do forget to see the emotions…
    A gift worth thousands or lakhs can never bring a hearty smile which a heartfelt wish or spending some precious moments together can bring…

    I just loved the way u have portrayed their love and the pain… Both Maan and Geet characters were fab….
    Maan never ignored them on purpose… Just that his past empowered him to hide his love unknowingly .. and that too he did it just to keep them happy … Just that he never realized that his time and love was the thing that they needed rather than the materialistic needs…
    And Geet, she loved him and inspite of the pain, she always was there for him…. She just didnt realize his love, yet she always trusted his love for family and stood by him….
    Meghna — i just love this character portrayal… it was perfect…. Coz girls always look forward towards their mother… and no daughter can see their mother in pain…. and hence her reaction towards her dad is totally justified…
    Mohit was more of cute part of their family….. so young and chirpy…

    So beautifully woven characters… Loved the way u showed the whole flow of events… Every individual POV and pain.. how Maan realizes and tries to correct his mistake… Geet trying not to expect more… Meghna’s outburst… and her reconciliation with her dad…. it was completely brilliance….
    It was completely emotional… Though painful, it was fabulous…

    One of ur best writings i guess. (though this is only the third story am reading of urs)….

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