Love For You Part 78

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Well First of all Huge Thank u to all my friends for supporting this story. I can’t tell u how much it felt good to read the long comments. it made me so excited to read ur feeling for the ff. and especially when i found some new reader commenting here that just made me float in heaven, LOL cheesy bur True. please be with me in further more update, it just began to be exciting and i m not planning to end this ff in near future. Finger crossed. U will help me by supporting me Wink

Part 78

Maan tore his gaze from Rudra and concentrated on his angels. His 2 fairy angels, so beautiful, so utterly cute. It made his heart swell in pride. He touched tammy’s cheek with one hand and other hand went on mann’s head caressing them, like assuring himself they are there. God, He missed nearly 6 yrs of their life. He had missed their first step, first word, first day to school, everything,, he lost everything. He had lost so many years of their life and all because of his greedy suspicion; he doesn’t curse geet for hiding them. He knows why she did that. Any mother who loves her child will protect them and apparently she felt to protect them from him, from their own father. He felt like laughing thinking of that, but the burning pain and teary eyes didn’t let him do that, he just hugged his children so dearly, so tenderly to his chest. But can he blame geet for that? can he say she did the wrong by hiding them from him? Whatever he did with her, she was bound to react that way. She doesn’t trust him and he doesn’t blame her for that because he deserves that, every bit of it.

Now sitting on his knees and hugging his 2 kids felt like he got the treasure he craved since so long but with them come the baggage. Yrs played in front of his eyes, how he had insulted geet, what he said to her about their baby, he had called them names and flatly denied they are his child. He felt like ground should shallow him right now. He doesn’t deserve the warmth of his 2 angel whom once he had declined to accept. How could he do that, was he so insecure, so insane. Tears flowed thinking that will his kids ever going to forgive him when they will know what he did? But they accepted him with all their heart, apparently without geet’s knowledge they had taken him in their life wholeheartedly. How can be they so forgiving? Maybe because they are nave and innocent but then Geet was innocent and he tarnished her, will he do the same with his children? Hell NO; he will cut himself before that.

Maan felt the gaze behind his back and saw rudra looking at him with some kind of emotion that make him quiver, is it hatred or? He knows this expression, this emotion has crossed him years before, and he knows Rudra is insecure. His gaze said all. 7 yrs before Maan had read rudra’s eyes and he can bet he read them well. But he just misjudge Geet’s loyalty because of some other’s plotting, he ignored his heart and carried the mind of proofs which he still regretted and maybe will regret his entire life.

Both men stared at each other; maan can see the strain on rudra’s face. For the first time he saw fear in the dark brown eye. Rudra was always stronger in emotion but today maybe he scared losing the angels. If maan wasn’t feeling the same he would have ignored the pain but how can he do that when he is feeling the exact same. He didn’t knew about his children, and missed everything of their 6yrs but Rudra had seen then growing and it will pierce him to leave them from him, just like maan who only got the taste of love for a few min and he can’t leave his kids now, not in a life time. He will fight for them; he will do anything if it means kneeling in front of geet or tarnishing the world’s peace. And then he knew he have to fight this man to win his angels, his kids. Because the sudden change of look in rudra just challenge that.

Rudra was watching the heart and soul of him snatching away little by little. He felt the pain that he always dreaded to feel, once again the closest possession is snatching away and he can’t do anything. Why always Him? Why always he is the one to lose everything, first geet and now HIS KIDS. Yes the day Tamanna and Mannat was born he had devoted everything to them. They are his children; he had accepted them as his own the day of their birth. He had loved geet once, and maybe still some corner of his heart still has the love but it’s more of a friendship. He can do anything for her because she is his only family, his best friend. He never regretted making her his friends and never would be. He will always love geet and never ask in return anything. Yes he loved her more than Maahi and maybe that’s why he left everything behind him just to be with her. But he doesn’t want anything from geet. He had accepted her as friend long before and slowly accepted Maahi as his future and then again fate played and he lost maahi. He could never forget her, but she didn’t believe him. He could never forget the betrayal; he had opened his heart to her and what she gave? Only mistrust. She didn’t even ask his explanation or didn’t even talk to him, just runaway.

People say a person can’t love 2 persons on the same time yet he is exception. Rudra had loved geet and still loves her but he also loves Maahi. A Person can’t forget his 1st love and he could never stop loving geet, she always stays in a safe corner of his heart but he craves to be with maahi, to be able to say her as a life partner. He too wanted a child, a family to pampered, to love and then he got tamanna and mannat. When he was lost in his grief to see geet in pain and his own heart torn away by maahi he was devastated. And then the angels came lighting his life. He gave his all life to cherish them. The love that was deep buried in his heart for the 2 person came all over the 2 kid. His heart and soul and he shared the bond with geet.

And now the person because of whom he had lost his everything again came to take the last treasure of his life. His Mannat and Tamanna also knew he is their father, and that’s just tore his heart. He never insisted them calling him father, because he knew only one person is their father and somehow he knew geet will also don’t like them calling him ‘dad’ so instead he told them he was his buddy but deep inside he always craved to hear ‘DAD or PAPA’. And today their real father came to know about which he always dreaded. But that doesn’t mean he will leave his all life, He can’t leave his all rights. He had lost too much now not his children. He had never fought for his love, even when he got chance he never thought to take anything which wasn’t his but now the fear of losing tamanna and mannat is too much. He can’t let a person to take their life over because now that person regrets his decision not to believe the person who loved him the most. Rudra know Maan can love a person to death but he has the strength to hurt them that much and least he want him hurting tammy and mann. Yeah deep in heart he knows Maan can never hurt angels but still the father in him was on guard. He won’t give up his children so easily, if maan want to claim then he have to fight. No way in Hell he is giving up, if he thought he can come and take over every life, he was wrong. If Maan think he will take away tamanna and mannat, Rudra will give tough fight, he can only take them over his dead body….

Maan: I want to take them to India. Maan said quite still looking at mannat and tammy.

Mann: wooow, India, mommy is also there? And Now we can stay with Papa there? I had never seen India, and I heard the fast food is yummy. Tammy hum golgappe khayenge first.

Maan chuckled softly: yeah princess u can have all fast food u want.

Tammy: hum Tajmahal dekhne ja sakte hain? Buddy said that the most beautiful wonder is Tajmahal, what did he said mann? Ha mo-moh-mohabbat ki sabse khubsurat nishani.

Maan instantly understood the nature of the 2 angel, while mann is complete foody and little softy towards the world like geet, Tammy was like him, knowledgeable and adaptable than her age. She would be more mature than mann. Just then maan heard rudra hissing.

Rudra: Mannat Tamanna Go back to your room. Let buddy talk to him for a moment. Maan was still for a moment, he got to know his daughter’s name from another person. It just pained him a little more, and then he heard his angels saying that melt him to the bone.

Tammy: Buddy please doesn’t let him go na, we will go to our school tom and dad will meet my frnds, that amelia was saying her father is stronger, I want to show my dad is more stronger than her dad.

Mann: ha Buddy, we can play video games today, mommy nahi khelne deti, now papa hai, he won’t be afraid of mommy like you.

Rudra winched a little but took a deep breath, maan heard the intake of breath and the softness in rudra’s voice.

Rudra: Mannat Tamanna, mommy won’t like u staying awake for this longer. Do you want to upset mommy? Both the girl shook their head vigorously, it nearly made rudra chuckle. They love their mommy to the bits. Then please go to your room and sleep while I will talk to him for a little while.

Mann: ok, but u wn’t let him go na?

Rudra looked pained and he slightly shook his head. tammy and mann ran to him and hugged him tight. Maan saw something on his face, like RELIEF? Yes relief and warmth spread on his feature when tammy and mann ran towards him and launched towards him and Rudra took them both to his arm which made him nearly tripping but he stopped right back. Then the kids kissed him with forced and Rudra gave a hearty laugh. Maan envied him, he envied him for what Rudra have and what he lost. He looked away pained with the sting in his eyes, but then felt a tug and looking down he saw his 2 angel cutely singling him to come on his knees. As he kneeled they threw their arms and hugged him dearly. Maan left everything and hugged them with fierce. He kissed them on their face, forehead, cheeks, head, everywhere. They also kissed him both his cheek.

Tammy: dad, u won’t go again na?

Mann: u will not leave us?

Maan: I won’t, I can’t, I will never leave u again. He said with a choked voice.

Tammy+Mann: Promise?

Maan closed the hand together with him: Promise.

They ran to their room and the 2 men faced each other….

Rudra: Don’t promise them something u can’t fulfill as u have a old tendency to break promises.

Maan: and what will u do after that Raizada, will u start collecting the broken pieces of that promise like u did years before. Like u did with geet? Like u enveloped her all sorrow in u?

Rudra roared: Don’t Khurana.. Don’t test my patience anymore, just get lost there where u came from. We don’t need u. they don’t need u, Geet don’t need u.

Maan strode crossed him hastily: Do u think those girls of mine don’t need me rudra? U seriously think so and that’s why they took your promise to not let me go and then mine? U seriously think they are good without me? And that’s why they were so miserable to leave me. And about Geet? I know she doesn’t need me, I know she has u but still she want me rudra. Can’t u see what she made herself? Can’t u realize what I had made her, she is different, she is the same geet anymore.

Rudra: Exactly, she isn’t same. She isn’t my mishty, and u f****** did this maan, u did this to her. She was innocent and u snatched her innocence?

Maan: I agree, I agree everything and I was ready for every punishment she should have given me, but wasn’t I deserved just a chance?

Rudra: No u don’t u don’t deserves her anything.

Maan: she is like this because of me, and u very well know she could be back only because of me.

Rudra: u f****** b******, u just want to snatch everything, u can’t give anything.

Maan: can’t I?

Rudra looked away, he knew maybe somewhere maan is right and he did mistake not contacting maan but he become selfish, ohh god he didn’t wanted to share his angels with him but what now. He will lose everything, He felt like a looser, every time every moment it’s his failure, again only he will lose like God also doesn’t want his happiness. Why him? Why can’t he be happy like other? Why destiny plays with him? Give happiness for a while and snatch everything for the rest of life. Maybe that’s his destiny.

Precap: ummm, ummm socha nahi. Yeah yeah I know I m devil, say something new. *Tich giving evil smile*

Chalo abb agar u guys will give me badda wala comment I should give u something. Teaser for future update.

‘I will give u the money but I need something in return Rathode,’

‘I want Geet to spend a night with me, and u can have 200 cr in next hour in your account.’

Now guess who is this? U know him too well, give me name gals .. and yeah I need long comment and please buzz me a little more if u want update as I become hell busy with study and forget about updates, so please contact me or spam wall(FB not IF) but do smack me please.

If u have forgotten Tamanna and Mannat.
If u have forgotten Tamanna and Mannat.

Disclaimer: any scene or situation of this ff is an imagination. If any action match to any other thing that is merely a co-incident. I haven’t copied any scene as far as my knowledge and I want to let you know beforehand. Still if anything matches it will be only a coincident.

© Tich Mg-All Copyrights Reserved 2013.

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29 responses to this post.

  1. Wow dear..lovely update with that two angels’s chirping voice which soothed maan but in another way he felt pain too…rudra’s insecurities are palpable..yes he was 7 yrs father to her but maan need to be more slow to convince him…but what he’s doing only he’s bossing around…trying to collect what he has destroyed..let’s see what will be rudra’s approach in this!

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  2. Errrrrrr Tich kya kar diya yaar!!!!!

    My heart is going out for both the men.If Maan was not on the other side I wud’ve never wanted Rudra and d angels to be separate.Rudra dedicated his 6 years of his life to them,they are his world.It wont be fair to separate them.

    But then Rudra and Geet atleast had each other,but Maan he was all alone suffering for all those year.We’ve seen him in severe pain,struggling alone.

    Does he really not deserve a chance????

    His emotions after seeing Tammy and Mann,were so overwhelming.

    And what about the kids????
    They love both the rivals equally.How cutely they took promise fm both Maan and Rudra that they wont let their daddy go!!!!!!

    And Geet,how devastated she must be feeling,fearing that Maan wud snatch her kids!!!!!

    Yet only Maan can bring back the real Geet.

    I think I m d most confused soul here as i cant guess whats gonna happen next.

    And now this strange precap.Who is this jerk now??????

    Do I still neet to say that it was a brilliant update?????

    And it made me hell eager to read d next part.

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  3. Errrrrrr Tich kya kar diya yaar!!!!!

    My heart is going out for both the men.If Maan was not on the other side I wud’ve never wanted Rudra and d angels to be separate.Rudra dedicated his 6 years of his life to them,they are his world.It wont be fair to separate them.

    But then Rudra and Geet atleast had each other,but Maan he was all alone suffering for all those year.We’ve seen him in severe pain,struggling alone.

    Does he really not deserve a chance????

    His emotions after seeing Tammy and Mann,were so overwhelming.

    And what about the kids????
    They love both the rivals equally.How cutely they took promise fm both Maan and Rudra that they wont let their daddy go!!!!!!

    And Geet,how devastated she must be feeling,fearing that Maan wud snatch her kids!!!!!

    Yet only Maan can bring back the real Geet.

    I think I m d most confused soul here as i cant guess whats gonna happen next.

    And now this strange precap.Who is this jerk now??????

    Do I still neet to say that it was a brilliant update?????

    And it made me hell eager to read d next part.

    -sweetsampa39

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  4. Sorry for double posting.

    Happened by mistake.

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  5. Posted by life19 on August 23, 2013 at 2:59 pm

    U are a devil in real

    how dare you stopped at the right moment

    i want kids to be back with maan to geet

    and maan should reach before anyone lays their eyes on geet…

    they have suffered so much tat now its time they get each other and the love they have for each other

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  6. Posted by fou on August 23, 2013 at 3:17 pm

    i have my xams going on,…..but i cant stop reading dis ff….its just awesome..thnq

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  7. god tich why did it end so soon wanted more kids are cute and pretty like mommy and clever like maan i know he wont leave them now maybe rudra will go back with them cant wait for maaneet to get together waiting impatiently thanks for a great read

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  8. awsem rudra scared insecure and his view you explained very well maan and kids bonding fab love the way you showed his state of mind kids asking rudra to not let go of maan and rudra maan arguments waiting for maneet renuin with kids

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  9. emotional update:-):-):-) cute gals calling maan dad:-):-):-) yipeeee…loving it…update soon pls

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  10. loved the update its awesome

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  11. i feel bad for rudra but maan has total right on his daugthers.he suffered alot.now maan needs love of his daughters and geet.loved the update

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  12. superb update
    loved it
    both maan and rudra pov were awesome
    mann and tammy are so cute
    waiting for more
    plz continue soon

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  13. Tich Complete reading it lfu my fav OMG its superb going geet came to india maaneet scenes were breathtaking maan meeting this new geet was fun
    angels n buddy bond really well i love them but what the maan came there want their angels back i didn’t like even love her dad they dont care abt buddy 😦 i so cried 4 rudra he will become lonely i know maan deserve 2nd chance but not is tarah rudra deserve angels more than maan i love 4 rudra increases now want to know geet’s reaction?

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  14. Posted by saragul11 on August 23, 2013 at 10:12 pm

    Awesome update

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  15. Posted by mmradhu97 on August 24, 2013 at 11:18 am

    Fantastic update… loved it so much…
    Waiting for the next part…
    Continue soon

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  16. Posted by ushankitvc on August 24, 2013 at 5:44 pm

    a very emotional updt….maan feeling guilty and want to repair his wrongdoings..rudra is out to protect geet and kids frm maan scared that maan might hurt them again….continue sooon

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  17. uff . . Kahan phas gai yar tich
    Feeling bad for rudra
    Maan was so happy that he found hs angels but was in pain to that he lost 6 years of their life. .
    Tammy and mann were very happy and excited . .
    Rudra is the one who is in more pain than anyone now . .
    He love them more then hs life . . If maan take them away than what will happen hm . .
    And who is this kamina in the precape. . .
    Rudra give that jerk a punch straight on hs nose.
    Waiting for next

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  18. Posted by angelickushi on August 25, 2013 at 12:06 pm

    loved the update
    i know v hv to know rudra’s feeling as well
    felt bad for him
    sab kuch woh kare lekhin aakhir mein baazi maan le jatha hain
    the cuties know abt their dad and want him to b with them
    hows geet gonna react for this
    so geet wants to pay off the money to maan and go away so asked her veerji’s help
    and who is that cheapo he has to face many deadly men for making such a demand who wud kill for our geetu

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  19. Hey tich it was an awesome part…I loved the way tammy n mann talked..they r amazing..I want them to b in india soon….can’t wait….

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  20. Posted by chahhat4eva on August 26, 2013 at 1:13 am

    Outstanding update dear…. Loved it so muchhhhh ❤😊🌺

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  21. Posted by khwaishfan on August 26, 2013 at 10:33 am

    awesum update! Maan meets hsi angels! They r so happy! Dnt want him to go! update soon 🙂

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  22. awsm update…im feeling bad for rudra…he just want his own sweet hppy fmly…he is crving for love…please do smthng good for him also ….

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  23. wow it was superb. i am happy for maneet’s baby. they are so happy. but i think maan should convince geet then he should take this action. now i think geet will be more upset. i felt bad for rudra. very exited for next

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  24. i absolutely love this FF have read it from the beginning. feel sorry for maan that he wasnt able to see his girls grow up but it is his right as a father after having repented for so long. and geet still doesnt know that he did try to come after her but then the accident. hope that geet will give him a chance. I think that the girls will bring them together. Rudra needs to back off. I know he means well and is insecure but that is not helping geet. !! cant wait for the next bit.

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  25. It’s lovely update.the angles part are awesome. and they love their dad was superb. just want everything to be okay little by little. plz update soon next part. tc

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  26. Posted by lovegeet on August 31, 2013 at 8:47 am

    hiii
    just read all the 78 parts
    loving it
    now going to read all your other ff’s too
    between bonding of rudra and geet
    he is a true friend who is their in her life in every ups and downs
    maan missed his beautiful 6 years of his life with his daughters

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  27. Tich hope your well have u updated love for u as I have only read pt 78 and nothing since and this is another fav so please let me know

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