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Kurbaan Tere Ishq Mein Part 41


Part 41

Its being one week and the tension isn’t leaving Khurana Mansion. Geet had her own share of problems. Maan is busy with family and Heer who isn’t coping well. On top of that Heer’s friend shilpa had come to live with them. Apparently she came Mumbai for her defected leg, when Heer and Prem came to KM with Priti she left for hospital. She came by evening and Heer visibly relaxed which earned browny points from Maan.

Shilpa is a naive girl with naive fascination. Geet being Geet hadn’t being open with friendly gesture to her which again set Heer on fire, and Geet care a damn about it. The only thing concern her is Maan and Shilpa becoming friends. She had seen them talking and laughing. Everyone is happy to find Maan cooling down. And Geet’s insecurities were spiking up.

Ved: jealous girlfriend looks hot always.

Geet: I am not jealous.

Ved: I never took your name.

His laughter was catching other’s eyes too. Geet couldn’t help but smile a little which Maan saw when he found them sitting with legs dangling in the swimming pool and Geet smiling at ved. He knew he should be happy to see her smile after so many days but seeing the reason for her happiness only made his insecurity worse.

No doubt he loves Ved but he also knew that Ved is fascinated with Geet and given time Geet would have been interested in Ved if she wad not being in love with him. The thought made him sick immidiately. He was so busy juggling between Heer and his other family problems that he hadn’t given much thought to Geet. He is ashamed to agree he has taken granted her love, her affection.

Ved: so may i know the reason for the sad face?

Geet looked at the water: nothing.

Ved: i thought i was improving,

Geet smiled genuinely: i might be younger than you but i am not so naive you know. I know that you like me, and you are as confuse about it as any other good guy would be.

Ved looked away: I really want to solve your problem Geet. I might have feelings that any guy can have for you but i know u love my brother who for some reason is taking you for granted.

Geet sighed: i never thought i will talk so heavy stuff ever in my life. If Sid had heard us, he would have gotten heartattack.

Suddenly her face got dimmed as sadness crept in.

Ved: your father, is he okay?

Geet: Sid said he is recovering.

Ved: Siddhant your friend right?

Geet: and Pari, my best friends.

Ved: why don’t you go and meet your father? Now that those goons are arrested and your relatives too are behind the bar you must be relieved.

Geet: what are you talking about, when did the police arrested them?

Ved: Bhai didn’t told u?

Geet just shook her head and Ved cursed himself.

Ved: I am sorry, he must have wanted to tell you himself, but.

Geet: lately he is too much busy to tell me anything. His priorities have changed.

Ved: Geet.

Vef couldn’t get her attention back because her eyes were locked with his brother. His very stupid brother.


Geet: we need to talk maan.

Maan: Geet

Geet: alone.

Heer: why can’t u talk here? Can’t u see finally bhai is relaxing without being drawn toward any drama. Why can’t u leave him alone for sometime. Always treats him like a puppet.

Geet waited her banter to stop before eyeing maan. Yes she expected him to defend her, but she also knew maan wouldn’t say a word against his precious sister. Yes heer is behaving childish and biting her head off from the day she had entered KM and yes maan had defended her honor every time but she can see it is wearing him off. It will soon tick off the bomb either on heer or on her but still she wanted him to defend her once against at least in front of shilpa. No chance there it seems.

Geet: I am not here for any argument. Just come with me and,,

Heer: and start your seduction?

Geet: what’s ur problem huh? If u can’t regard me atleast show some respect to ur brother in front of a guest.

Heer : she is not a guest. She is much more important than u to me and to my brother because he finally sees what a shallow bitch you are.

And that set her off instantly.

Geet: ofcourse your brother doesn’t find this criple any stranger and was so busy with her for days that he couldn’t formulate an incoherent sentence to say to me for days now. This defected and battered soul and your bruised ego needs him so much that he forgot i even exist in this house too.

Shilpa’s eyes were huge and shocked while Heer was gaping at her, then flicked his eyes on shilpa who dashed mumbling silent ‘excuse me’ but none missed the motion where she wiped the tear with her hand. Geet didn’t felt good saying the nasty things but she is beyond any feeling right now, she is furious.

But then Maan’s glare were murderous, well anger is better than distance, she can handle his anger, harshness but not his distance.

Maan: what the hell was that?

Heer excused herself and ran behind shilpa.

Geet: what? Your sister can insult me whenever she want and i can’t say the truth about her precious friend. Oops your frnd right?

Maan: this is your jealousy, right Geet?

Geet: even it is jealousy so what? You don’t have time to say about the most important thing that matter in my life right now and here you were relaxing and talking, making friendship with her? Her, a cripple? You could do better than that maan.

Maan: like making you the hanging wire in my neck? At least she has defect in her leg not in her heart.

He abruptly stopped, Geet has a habit of blabbering whatever comes to mind that she don’t even mean it but he is mature and knew how to handle himself and HER, then what have gotten in to him?

Geet: Like me?

Her demeanour has changed since he uttered those words, he wanted to apologise or shake her to make some sense but she was way past it.

Geet: you know what maan, you are absolutely right, i have become a nuisance for you.

Maan: i never said that.

Geet: you don’t have to. Your words implied it.

Maan feared the calm Geet more the spitting venom she utters when she went on defensive. Right now she is utterly calm which horrifying him right then.

Geet: So why not we take a break from it Maan? You stay here resolving your family problem and I visit my father to see how is he doing.

A chill ran his spine hearing her words. Panic gripped his heart as she stepped back. His hand went to reach her and gripped her wrist as tight as he could to hold her in his life. Because he have a sense, if he let her go now he might loose her forever.

Maan: you want to break up Geet?

Geet: i didn’t said that, i said we need time apart. To solve our own problems.

Maan: i thought we were doing that together.

Geet smiled sadly: you are too busy to even notice me maan, leave my problems. You don’t even let me in yours. We don’t spend any time anymore. Nor even you discuss your problems with me. Atleast when we stay apart and bring our life back together we could move on from here.

Maan: it seems to me you want to move on from me. Probably a better suiter u have found. His eyes went on Ved who were looking at them with concern.

Geet: Don’t disgarce your brother like that.

Maan left her hand and she rubbed ir unconsciously trying to flow the blood that stopped with his harsh hold.

Maan sneered: concerned for him?

Geet: what about your concern for the girl Maan? I didn’t even brought that here because deep down i know the problem is with us, we need time to understand each other better to take this further and you damn well know it. Your brother or that girl isn’t the problem. It’s you who need to understand how to balance this life.

She left him there, but she couldn’t forget those haunted eyes. Yes he loves her but can it withstand time’s wrath. They both aren’t mature enough to handle this situation on top of everything going on. She isn’t leaving him forever but she need time apart from him to know that she can breathe without him. Or else suffocation will kill her and him too.

But will she survive to take the breath after leaving him here? Even for a few days? She doubt it.

Her little stuff was almost packed when she heard the door violently opening the shutting and a furious Maan striding towards her.

Maan: do you think I will let you go so easily, i told you once u entered in my life i am not letting u go ever.

Geet: i am not leaving you Maan or breaking US,

Maan: then what are you doing damit? Leaving like this, leaving me.

His voice was so thick with emotion that she felt weak on her knees. She didn’t knew who came first but next she knew she was plastered between a wall and his chest. Their lips clashing together and she can taste blood but it was sweet at the moment. His lips and teeth weren’t showing mercy on her flesh as it trail down a path from her neck to throat then her lips again.

Maan was frantic. The fear of loosing her was so palpable that he was doing everything to bind her with him.

Geet’s sense had left since the moment his lips touched her. All rational thought of leaving left her as he possessed her body, heart and soul.

Maan: Don’t leave me.

Geet wanted to say she isn’t leaving him; she is going see her father only. He didn’t left much time for her to remember anything other than him.

Warning 18+ content…..

His tongue sucked the base of her throat while she couldn’t stop her moaning. Her body was set ablaze with his passion. He returned sucking her lips and tongue making her legs weak. His hand was pinning her hand above her head as his lips continues its torture till she surrender completely to him. In one swipe he held her in his arm not breaking the kiss and placing her on the bed.

Geet tried to remind herself why it is bad idea to let him touch her now, but all rational thought evaporate as his hands and lips, and tongue touched her. Her lips tried to coherent his name but only a moan came out and it was enough to push the wild beast on the edge. He was shaking. His need and fear mixed was making him wild. But still he never hurt his geet. his lips were passionate yet soft, demanding yet considerable.

He traced her throat then collarbone with his lips, sucking the neck and leaving marks while his hand was busy on her shorts undoing the buttons. She can only arch her hip to help him. Her nails were piercing his shoulder as he wasn’t wearing any shirt, only a white vest and pants. His lips trailed from her throat to her bosom and gave a light bite on her covered breasts. Her breath was hitched and she pulled his hair to stop him there for a moment and that was enough for him to pull her shirt through her head.

She was sitting on his lap when their eyes met. The haze of confusion and lust cleared from their vision and both stared at each other for longer. Maan waited for Geet to push him but she tighten her hold on his vest.

Geet: give me this night Maan, just me. Nothing on your mind but us, give me this moment Maan.

His heart felt heavy with her pleading. When his hold tightens he saw the relief in her eyes. He understood how much he had neglected her in his duty towards his family. Her lips came first but he replied her urgency with passion. One tear fell from her eyes but Maan sucked it. Soon their cloths apart from under garments scattered on the rooms and none paid attention where it was going. They were busy in the love. Both knew tonight they won’t stop at any boundary and both needs it.

His lips found the valley between her cleavage and his hands were kneading every flesh he could find. Her hips met it and in one squeeze he brought her above him and gave her all control that she desire. Their lips never left each other while hands explored each other. She broke the kiss on to suck his collar bone then his chest. Her lips trailed his skin and licks his abs. he couldn’t contained his groan and brought her closer to him holding her nape in a tight grip. It only heighten her lust filled eyes which spiked his passion.

He tore up her bra and sucked the gloves hungrily. She wanted to shout, to cry of joy, to express everything her body was feeling but he didn’t left any room. His tongue trailed from her bosom to the apex of the thighs. Her automatic response was to close it but he didn’t let her shy away. When his tongue met the most sensual and private part she felt the light. It was too soon and she wanted the final act but he wasn’t letting his torture stop. She cried his name and he pushed her on the brink but then again pulling her away. She felt the loss and looked at him. Her flushed face was so desirable that he felt undone. He came closer to her face.

Maan: condom.

One word usually was enough to break the spell but geet wasn’t letting it to break the serenity.

Geet : I don’t want any barrier between us, not today. Your every open part is mine maan.

Maan: but jaan

Geet: its ok. I am good. Please don’t stop

Geet knew Maan thought she was on the pill but fraction of doubt still hovers his lovely feature and she kissed his lips, sucking it and entering her tongue in it. He lost every will power next.

She knew what she did was wrong, letting him assume she was on the pill was thoroughly wrong on her part when she wasn’t on it but at the moment she could do any thing to keep him closer to her, because she felt him closer to him in a way she never felt and nobody will ever be that closer to him. Not physically but emotionally, and mentally.

Maan kissed and sucked her lips hard and felt her wetness pooling more and more, it was easy to loose himself and filled her till the hilt but he doesn’t want to hurt his geet. he want to cherish her and give her no doubt on his love. So when he entered her and felt the slight flicker of pain in her eyes, he hesitated which made her tighten her hold on him instantly. She kissed his lips as the pain subsided and he took a steady rythm. Her heartbeat raise as each stroke met the point her pleasure lied. Her moan got louder as she went through the brink of ecstasy, lights burst through the haze and she felt herself floating. He wasn’t behind, he came with her shouting and then biting her neck softly.

Both lied on the bed looking at each other with love and completeness. He wanted to tell her, how much he love her, how much he is sorry for not looking after her but Geet didn’t let himnas she grabbed him again. They spent the night in each othe arms, loving and making love. Because somewhere both weren’t sure of tomorrow.

Next morning Maan opened his eyes with a empty room and empty feeling.

Maan: Geet,,,, geet. He called her some more, then checked her bathroom and eventually the whole mansion but Geet wasn’t there. Panic slowly seeped through his vein as he frantically searched for her. With his voice rising everyone in the mansion woke up and upon enquiry got to know Geet left at the dawn. She called a cab from an agency and investigating the driver Maan got to know Geet was dropped at the airport.

Slowly everything sinked in and rage like never before settle inside his heart crushing the love. She had left him. Only one thing surrounded his mind. She had left him after he showed her how much he love her. She never loved him the way he love her. It was her conquest, her ‘zid’ to get him and now she left him like a used toy.

Ved tried to reach him but Priti beat him. She placed a tentative hand on her son’s shoulder.

Priti: what happened Maan? Where is Geet?

Maan: She left me Maa, she left me.

And he cried for the first time in his life hugging his mother

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Kurbaan Tere Ishq Mein Part 40


Pls read previous parts to read further. The next 5 parts are written a few months back but never got the time to post it. Now starting it again. Next part will be done tonight too.

Part 40

Maan had hated this person for past 18 yrs but today seeing the big man on his knees somewhere he felt pity for him. The way Abhinav was looking right at the moment anyone will pity him. It was like someone had ripped his heart away.

Abhi: My daughter? Heer? I always wanted to name our daughter Heer. Here also She thought about me.

Maan: she only knows how to give u happiness. She wouldn’t want to see you like this, though you deserves this.

Tears were only talking for Abhinav as he leaned on the wall. Maan just sat with him and Geet left them together, just watching them from afar.

Ved: You love him too much, do you think he loves you same?

Geet was startle to find Ved talking to her standing just a few feet away.

Geet: Maan loves them who are his own, and he can give his life to them. So just think how much his love can do for anyone.

Ved nodded which just made Geet more doubtful. And as her nature she went for the kill.

Geet: Tell me Ved, do you have any romantic notion for me in your little head? Because if you have then brother of Maan or not i will chop your head off. Get the little thing in your little head. I am only Maan’s, so throw out any stupid infatuation you have for me. Get it?

Ved just looked at her in awe while Geet left the place, a small laughter from Dev brought him back.

Dev: She is feisty.

Ved: Maan bhai loves her.

Dev: You always loved what Maan bhai loved, dadima told me. But this is not a thing bro, she is a human.

Ved greeted his teeth: Don’t i know that? If it was not Maan bhai i would have gone for her but i won’t snatch my brother’s happiness. Though IF he let her slip away, i won’t back up for him. She deserves to be loved.

Ved left the place leaving a nag of fear in Dev’s heart.


Next morning Heer Prem and Shilpa reached Mumbai where they met Priti. Heer immidiately hugged her mother and started sobbing. Priti was quite, too quite for Heer who never left her mother side. Prem and Shilpa took her blessing. Priti was proud on her daughter’s choice but right at the moment her concern was something else.

She couldn’t be wrong hearing the voice. Her maa’s voice. Though Geet tried to change the subject then but it was too late. In a haste Priti agreed on Prem’s mention of coming to Mumbai with them. Too many coincidence for her.
She knew this day will come but still it is too soon. Yet she couldn’t do anything. She is worried for Maan, and this time her son comes first. She knew Maan needs her.

Her doubt cleared as her vission clouded. Its not the same house but still she can feel her heartbeat rising. So many yrs and still she felt her heart will come out from her chest. Prem understanding something is wrong immidiately stand by Priti’s side which she was grateful.


Maan saw Abhinav pacing restlessly. Everyone was watching him with either fascination or in concern. Maan tried not to show his concern but after their last day’s silent sitting together he still felt the compassion. Though he is angry but he is a concern son too. Abhinav had wanted to meet Heer and Priti, but Maan told it’s not the right time. He was too quite after that.

Gauri and Savitri devi too watched him in concern. It was like he can feel something is about to happen. They got to know from Maan about their another daughter, Heer. Gauri was ashamed of herself. She blamed herself for coming between Priti and Abhinav but for the first time Dadima was the one to tell her not to dwell on past. That didn’t make it easy.


It was tough for priti but she wanted to tell Heer before she encounter her father. Prem saw the concern on her face but before he or priti can say anything Heer just barged inside the mansion.

Heer was like a fresh air to the mansion. Entering the mansion she dashed wildly towards Maan who hugged her fiercely. Brother sister duo melted all the hearts there watching them. A glass left Abhinav’s hand as he watched his daughter who looked at him in confusion. At first he just stared at her but then Priti entered the mansion. Abhinav tried to say something do something but time just stood still for him…

He suddenly dropped to his knees trying to take the sharp glasses not finding anything else to do at the moment. It shook so badly. Before Gauri could do anything a hand reched towards Abhinash, steading his shaking hand and yet againg saving him from scratching his hand, again hurting herself.

Both stared at each other, Priti trying to smile remembering their old days while Abhinav only looked at her big brown eyes. Fate could play so cruel yet so life changing games. Abhi didn’t know how to react while Priti put away the glasses before it hurts him. Savitri devi was shedding silent tears with a tremendous smile.

Priti: You will hurt yourself, go and wash your hand.

Abhinav came out from his trance: You are here, finally here Priti?

Savitri: Aapko dard se bachate bachate najane kab tak apne aapko saza degi meri bacchi. ( to save you, God knows till when my daughter keep hurting herself)

Priti immidiately hugged Savitri devi: I am sorry Maa, i am really sorry.

Savitri: You should be, how could you leave your mother?

Priti: Nahi chahti thi Maa, lekin i had to do it.

Abhinav: why? Why did you left?

Maan: to save you, to save your present wife’s honour. She did everything for you.

Priti: Maan, mind your tone. I never taught you to behave like this to your elders.

Maan: he doesn’t deserves my respect.

Priti: Whatever happened its between me and your father, you have no right to talk to him like this.

Heer: Yet it effected our lives maa, it’s not only you that faced everything it destroyed our lives too. And i would like to know why it effected us so much, what happen to you that you left him.

Priti visibly shallowed: we were never meant to be together. I wanted to make it easy for everyone.

Heer: Did it make it easy maa? For you, for us or for him?

Heer was boiling in anger, craving for a father had made her bitter. She didn’t want to understand any reason that kept her away from her father. She is not angry on her mother only, she is angry with whole world. Abhinav only stared at his daughter. His both children Maan and Heer has taken their grandmother’s rage. He tried to touch Heer who shrugged his hand with a warning glare.

Geet: can we discuss it with minimum drama? Start with sitting and talking.

For the first time Geet opened her mouth to lessen the tension but 2 pair of eyes threw fire towards her. It was Heer and Maan, both with different reason.

Heer: Ohh so you are here too. Should have guessed. You finally finish sucking his blood?

Geet: yeah his blood is kind of sweet you know.

Maan: Heer Geet shut up u both.

Geet: if she throws sarcastic comments i can answer her with equally measure and beside when everyone can sit and talk why trying to make it more uneasy with the drilling and spitting fire. All are adults here. Excepts few. She eyed Heer meaningfully.

Dev and Mihika giggled but straighten getting the eye spitting from Heer.

Maan eyed Geet: Geet just keep quiet and let them decide what they want.

Heer: it’s our family matter, tell her not poke her face in it.

Geet waited for Maan to say something to Heer but Maan just sighed which only hurt Geet. She immidiately left the place which earn snorts from Heer. She is behaving childishly but she doesn’t care. Deal with it.


Geet was feeling lonely day by day and today’s fiasco only made her anxiety set on fire. Her hands were shaking so badly. The closeness of her throat, rising heartbeat only pushed her towards the pills. The small little yet strong pills can make her heartache numb. She knew its making her addictive but nowadays she is needing it more and more, that’s why she kept one small bottle of pills safely tucked in her bottom cupboard.

even after taking two pills the craving to listen to her father didn’t left. Feeling secure with their security she called Sid and got to know about het father’s conditions. They chatted for some time.

After chatting with Sid and seeing her lifeless father she get to understand Heer’s pov too. She is away from her father for only a few days and its making her anxiety worse, then what must be heer feeling after meeting her father for the first time.


In the hall Heer was sitting on the couch surrounded by everyone but her mind was numb, shocked. She doesn’t know how to react. Priti had told their story by now and she was blank. Honestly she is confuse whom to blame or how to behave, so she just cried. Cried for her mother, her brother, her lonely childhood, her craving for a father when other kid’s parents came to school or when their father would compete in school competition. She had often blamed herself that her father must hate her. So he left them but seeing how Abhinav cried holding her, hugging her close to him she couldn’t say that anymore.

Abhinav told her that he never hated them, he had always loved her, Maan and their mother. Priti had shed silent tears and Gauri cried hugging her. Such a mess of a situation.

After few hours when the crying and sobbing subsided everyone saw the sisterly bond Priti and Gauri still shares. It only amazed everyone.


Gauri: He still loves u di.

Priti: and he is your husband now.

Gauri: you are still connected to him, he never submitted those paper you know, infact burned them.

Priti: technically we were apart for 19yrs, it won’t value.

Gauri: it wasn’t enough to erase the love you both shared. I may have been married to him for 19yrs but you still know him more than me. You know deep down you will hold the bigget part of his heart always, as he has yours.

Priti: Gauri it’s pointless. It’s being so long. We will eventually leave mumbai at some point.

Gauri with a sweet smile: He won’t let you. Not this time.

Priti: he is your husband.

Gauri: his soul will be always yours. I am happy to be with you both because 19yrs of loneliness isn’t worth one married life.


Heer: I don’t know what to say about the weird conversation between them. For god sake they are like ummm soutan right? How did they became saheli? I thought they will atleast won’t talk to each other or try to avoid each other. Here they re talking like best friends and sacrificing their love.

Ved snorts: i won’t be sympathetic if both of them leave him for each other.

Savitri devi: Glad someone found it amusing.


Geet: what? You did not think i am attempting suicide, are you?

That exactly Abhinav thought when he saw Geet sitting on the rooftop dangling her legs from the edge and looking down intensely.

Abhinav: come down Geet, you will fall or else and i love my son enough to know he loves you to the bits.

The last thing he thought when he came on the terrace to find some alone time, was to find the love of his son’s life dangling her legs from the edge of the terrace.

Geet groaned: you see i would have come a long time before if i could move from here. I am afraid of heights and i fear if i move a muscle i will fall because my whole body feels like jello.

Abhinav sucked his breath: you are not on drugs are you?

Geet suddenly sobbed: they are anxiety pills but i think they are working like one you said.

Abhinav: how many of it you have taken?

Geet: 2, or 4, wait 7, i don’t remember.

She again sobbed and abhinav thought his heart will come out if she sway once again.

Abhinav: here, take my hand and come down. Will you sweet girl?

Geet sobbed: you make me arch for my father you know? But he is in coma. You resembles him too. Plump and soft. You both should join gym you know.

Despite the situation Abhi chuckled and couldn’t help himself from falling in love with this little girl.

Abhinav: I promise to join gym if you give your hand little girl.

Geet: will you promise to call me little girl always?

Abhinav: promise.

He left a sigh of relief when Geet landed safely on the ground away from the edge.

Geet: you know whatever bad decisions you made, you are the reason maan came in my life so i can’t stay mad at you. And remember one thing, no matter how bad a day is, it always passes and a new day come with new hope, new happiness. You have to recover from the bad one quickly to grab the best one.

Abhinav stood their mesmerized by the sweetness of the girl whom everyone think as smart and little selfish, and she taught him one lesson he couldn’t learn his whole life.

Life is full of mistakes, a wise man is who corrects his mistake by the sunset…

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Kurbaan Tere Ishq Mein Part 39


Part 39

It’s being so many days that she had rested her head on her brother’s chest listen him assuring her that everything will be fine. It’s being so long that she met her mother, hearing her soothing voice. She missed her family. She missed being surrounded by love. It’s not like Juneja family hates her. In fact except Prem’s mother everyone like her and Prem, she can feel his love in his every gesture, and his father was ecstasic having her in his mansion. Unknowingly he had stirred emotion that she had buried long seeing her mother’s suffering. Knowing her mother will end up crying and blame herself for depriving a father’s love Heer never asked about her father but deep in her heart she still craves for the fatherly pampering. Though Maan was more like a father than a brother but Mr Juneja had shown her what a real father can be. She secretly wish now that if her father had been a little of Mr Juneja her mother would have never left him. How she wish what must be her father looks like. How he had treated her, like a princess.

She shook her head and concentrated on Prem’s cousin sis Shilpa. She is a sweet girl with black and hazel mix unique eyes and sweet smile though she doesn’t smile much. When she had arrived at the mansion and hugged Prem like her life depends on it,,, Heer was irked and mean to her. Then she got to know Shilpa, her sweet nature and a scarred heart which someone had tore before. How she wish her Maan would have seen it, what if Shilpa had caught his eyes before Geet. All of this wouldn’t have happen. Heer detest Geet, ever that day she saw Geet insulting Maan and her attitude always had pushed wrong buttons of Heer.

Prem had told her everything. At first Heer was angry that Geet somehow betrayed Prem by loving Maan but then if they mutually hadn’t broken that marriage she and Prem wouldn’t have happen but then her brother didn’t had to risk his life.

She doesn’t hate Geet, once upon a time heer adored her but she felt Geet was more guarded and her attitude pushed her far away. Now when she hear how and what her brother went through she blame Geet for all of this. Her heart arched to see Maan but Prem said they couldn’t. Not now. On the other hand Priti couldn’t come also which left her heart broken.

Prem: what are u wondering Heer?

Shilpa: not again…

Heer pouted her lips: I m missing my bhai.

Prem: wo bhi Kya miss karni ki cheese hain!!!

He muttered those word under breath but seeing Heer’s glare he gave a fake smile covering it.

Prem: I mean u don’t have to missed him for longer. We are heading towards Mumbai tomorrow.

Heer sequel in happiness: really???? Oh my God. Thank u thank u so much Prem.

In excitement she didn’t knew when her body pressed on his and hand went to his neck. Prem was in heaven. Seeing it Shilpa only chuckled which was enough to break love bird’s nest for now.

Heer: but maa

Prem: She is coming tom and we will meet her at Mumbai airport then we will be headed towards Abhinav uncle’s house.

Heer: ye kon hain?

Prem: Maan and Geet are staying there. At first I didn’t know it was Abhi uncle house as Geet only told me they are safe but when she said the owner’s name it turn out to be dad’s best friend. So dad will talk to him toni8 and we will fly first thing in the morning.

Heer: thank u Prem

Prem: for what?

Heer: For saving my life.

Prem: Ohhh u mean for saving ‘my’ life.

Heer blushed a scarlet color hearing the hidden meaning which earn a sweet smile from Prem. But one person was lost in her own world. Their love brought so many memories for Shilpa. Once Mumbai was so fascinating for her. But today she hated it. That city snatched her everything. Her passion her motivation and her love. Now she runs on the other end of the world. Mumbai. She will see again Mumbai.


Maan: what the hell were u thinking informing Prem about the place we are in. You know we can’t afford to inform all this shit to Heer. She will be shattered, she doesn’t know anything about our father. You know seeing maa crying she refused to even know anything,, now all of a sudden u want her to face him. How could u do this Geet. I thought u r more sensible than this.

His shouting didn’t affect her the way his hysterica did, the way he sat holding his head and rubbing his face said his tension on Heer’s reaction. Hell she was also worried but she needed to know all this which Maan doesn’t want.

Geet: u know she need to know.

Maan: no,

Geet: Maan Heer deserve to know her father. Let her decide after that.

Maan: she doesn’t need him.

Geet: Ohhh really and did u know that. Did she said that?

Maan: no, yes I mean her action.

Geet placed her hand on his shoulder: Maan every girl needs to know her father, every girl want to feel her father’s love and u can’t stop that.

Maan: and what about maa? What about her sacrifices?

Geet: I m not saying whatever Priti maa did wasn’t right but she should have atleast once told uncle about Heer. He deserves to know he has another daughter. He would have loved as much as he love Mihika.

Maan: maa wouldn’t like that.

Geet: are u sure Maan?

Maan looked at Geet for a moment then looked away knowing she is right. But then both their eyes fell on the person standing at the doorstep. 1st time in those days Abhinav entered Maan’s room in full intention to confront him but he never knew what surprise waited for him.

Maan on the other hand witnessed his father crumble and his heart went to him, without even realizing he ran towards Abhi who sat on the floor holding the wall, the expression on his face was enough to make Maan shiver.

Precap: confrontation.

I know many ppl doesn’t want maan or priti to forgive Abhi and they are true to their reason, but it isn’t like abhi did those thing deliberately, he was young and stupid and in lovr though that doesn’t mean he will get everything on gold platter.. just wait a lil for real confrontation. And no Maan didn’t forgiven Abhi yet nor Gauri. He just has an soft corner for Gauri as she is really a genuine person.

Trust me this track is very important for maaneet’s future.. and one thing, yes Ved likes Geet in a romantic and confuse manner so be prepare lol…

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Kurbaan Tere Ishq Mein Part 38


Pls read last part first then read this one,,

Part 38

After Your birth he had never looked backward. He loved u very much. U were his life but he started guarding his emotion around Priti. He loved his father a lot and when he left us, some part of Abhi’s life left. He loved Gauri a lot and he had to leave her, then he started loving Priti and became afraid of his emotion so he stopped his heart before it was cursed. He was afraid he will lose ur mother and eventually he did. Priti started avoiding him because she thought he resented her. His parties grew and She lost it. Priti was reserved but once she said she love him she meant it. Sadly he took her love for granted and when his arrogance and fear stopped him showing his affection towards her, Priti also stopped her heart and guarded it. They hit the rough patch of their marriage. 4yrs of life together crumbling that’s when he met Gauri broken fearful and widower.

He never meant to betray Priti but they say old heart die hard. He became friend with Gauri again. Her misery pulled him, she married a person who used to brutalized her and after the death of the husband Abhi became her friend again. Abhi was confuse. He loved Gauri but then his feeling towards Priti confused him and after few months of friendship he did the thing that crushed ur mother later.
He cheated Priti with Gauri.

Abhi was remorsefull after betraying Priti. He came to me told me everything, then promised never to meet Gauri. But then Gauri became pregnant and once again ur father’s protective instinct started swelling, he started helping her with money. When I got to know that, which was actually him admitting to me, I was furious at ur father and straight went to meet Gauri. I wanted to see an evil bitch but when I met her my heart went to her. There was standing a broken young girl, fearful, destroyed, in pain. She had lost everything and I was the person to blame for;  because of me she lost her love, married to a brute and then alone with a child of my son. It was all I could take and then I accepted her.

I know u must be detesting me and Abhi but a child bind relation that sometime we didn’t realize. Abhi loved his child and once he saw the twin he couldn’t control his love for them. Gauri wanted to leave the place so that his married life wasn’t in a jeopardy but she couldn’t apart father and sons. Then Abhi told me to do something. I couldn’t have hurt Priti like that because she would left him so I took her to a place where she could see Gauri and took pity on her. My plan was successful and she brought Priti home….

Seeing Gauri with his child the old love surfaced again and Abhi did the inevitable which broke Priti and which remorse he carried till now. When Gauri met u she fell in love with you. Ved was close to u and dev was with his grandmother because Gauri could’t take care of 3 children. Whenever Gauri tried to leave the place she couldn’t,,  not because of ur father but u. She loved u like a mother. Like Priti loved Ved.

Abhi thought he could have both the women he loved. He knew He was in love with Gauri and Priti at the same time but then Gauri was pregnant again with Mihika and Abhi was in stress to break the news to Priti because she will question who is the father of the child. Ur mother loved every person that came in her life, she loved Gauri like a little sister and was protective towards her.

Once she got to see the sign of Gauri’s pregnancy she was hysterical in fear and pain. She wanted best for Gauri and the kids,.she wanted to know if Gauri love someone or anyone molested her. Gauri broke down seeing so much love and in regret she tried to leave the house again.

Abhi finally snapped and told Priti everything. She was broken, numb. For days she couldn’t looked at them and seeing the pain in her eyes Abhi became agitated. He said so mean things just to take reaction on the news and Priti did. She left the house with a note and divorce paper saying her last wish is to see Gauri married,,,, to him. So that the child could have a name. And Abhi did. Not because he was excited to do so. Bcz he loved ur mother too much to refuse.’

Dadima cried and wiped her eyes seeing the crushed emotions on Maan’s face. Geet was horrified and in tears.

Dadima: He tried. God know he tried to search u and Priti. He was broken, he couldn’t eat or sleep and once he knew he couldn’t find her he accepted her verdict of his life.

They heard a sob. Maan saw Gauri leaning on Abhinav crying mufling her voice and Abhi caressing her head absent minded.

So much pain, for what? Love. Love should give life but here it destroyed so many lives. But Love never asked question it give life freely. It’s us human that makes it so complicated….


Maan didn’t left the house which was positive sign for everyone but that doesn’t mean he forgave & forgot. He couldn’t. Abhinav tried to talk to him, unsuccessfull atempt didn’t stop him. Maan on the other hand totally ignored him, but he couldn’t give his back towards Gauri. He tried. He tried to hate her, ignore her, behave rudely but Gauri accepted everything with love and adoration which made it impossible to hate her. Finally Maan left pretending and accepted that he couldn’t hate her instead he had a place for her in his heart, closer to his maa. He couldn’t take out the little flash of himself running and Gauri behind him with food. Sometimes it made him smile which everyone noticed but pretended not to.

Gauri took care of Maan when he felt weak, though he never showed and it angered him to see concern in other’s eyes but never he got irritated to see that in Gauri’s eyes.

Geet was finding all this a little overwhelming and on top of it Ved’s undying attention to her made her uncomfortable. She wasn’t used to large family, specially so complicated.

Maan: Ved. How did u remember me and did Dev and Mihika also knew?

Dev and Mihika simply nodded which made Geet’s jaw drop on the floor.

Geet: how? I mean u never met Maan and Ved was just 3. Even Maan didn’t remember.

Ved smiles a little and in that moment he looked like a little boy who got her favorite toy.

Ved: Mom told us everything when we were 15 and Mihika was 12 but weirdly she was the eldest in understanding relation. I saw picture and yes I got vague memory of our togetherness. Then Dadima told us every little bit of Maan bhai, his likings & dislikings and ofcourse about badi maa, Priti maa.

Maan immediately stiffen but Geet looked at Ved in awe. It’s like in one moment he became a sensitive man from a ruthless jerk devil.

Maan: u call her,,,

Dev: we all call her badi maa bhai like u called mom choti maa in ur childhood.

Maan looked at Gauri who looked at him with yearning, love and pain. Sadness. Regret. He took some air through his nose, his throat trying to lose the knot. He could’t bring himself to call her that now. He can’t break his mother’s heart by accepting the person who ruined her life. But a little corner sighed. Was is her that played or desnity played the cruel game with her? Wasn’t she was the toy in the hand of fate?

Precap: Heer & Prem….

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Kurbaan Tere Ishq Mein Part 36


Part 36

Savirti devi is a strong minded and hugely stubborn person. Most her characterizing followed the next generation specially Maan who was as much stubborn as her. Then Ved. Apparently here she proved him wrong. She stopped him leaving the house with one stern glare then a few crocodile tears. Maan finally accepted defeat in front of her and cracked the 1st real smile while Geet gaped with an open mouth.

Maan dismissed Abhinav and Gauri’s every advance towards him, he didn’t even looked at their genuine happiness but Maan can feel Abhinav’s struggle, he somewhere doubted it’s bcz he wanted to know about Priti which again Surprised and irritated him at the same time. He just gave a curt ans that his mother isn’t his concern anymore.

Savirti devi informed Maan that she always used to say a lot of things about him to his other half siblings,, and Maan got to know that they all knew about him. From the moment Geet said Maan’s name and his surname Abhinav dig a lot of thing which resulted knowing he was indeed his son. He had confronted his children except Ved who are hotheaded and adored his Maan bhai. He remembered little about him but as Dadima told him about Maan, he started building his own image. Anyway Maan somehow look a lot similer to his childhood picture but the harshness of youth made him more handsome.

Geet: but how do u remember Ved but not others.

Ved: bcz I have spent my 1st 3yrs walking running following Maan bhai. Mihika wasn’t born yet and dev was with nanima who died when we were 6yrs.

Geet: but,,

Geet was much confuse with the relation and family chain,, she made a face and stopped herself asking anything to Maan in fear of pushing him on the edge. If it did anything to Maan that was smile, seeing his mishty’s confuse face. He assured her he will tell everything which Geet nodded happily..

Savirti devi was giving close attention to Geet, Maan saw the evil grin on his grandmother’s face which only amused him. On the other hand Geet just shrugged and held Savirti Devi’s gaze. Not everyone can do that she mused and sighed while Maan looked at her in adoration and pride.

Then came the inevitable question, that Maan dreaded and so was Geet.

Dadima: where is Priti Maan?

Her tired voice held so much pain worry and love. Maan could have avoided or gave stern response to his father but not his dadima. Priti didn’t brought him up like that, she wanted him to respect everyone that included his father and his wife. He closed his eyes remembering Gauri running behind him with a glass of milk. Her love can’t be made up. Or was it?

Savirti: unhe hamari yaad nahi aati? Priti used to call me maa then why never she tried to contact me? Doesn’t she know I love her more than my own son.

Maan: I don’t know why she didn’t contacted u. I used to bug her but

Geet: maybe that’s why she never did that. Priti maa could never destroy a relationship between a son and his mother. Maybe she knew u will support her going against ur own son and,,,

She abruptly stopped looking 5 pair of eyes looking at her and 2 more from the balcony, they heard her and it made her little nervous.

Geet: I m sorry I shouldn’t have said that. It’s your family matter.

She couldn’t say more as Maan held her hand slipping his fingers in her. Savirti devi saw it.

Savirti: do u love my grandson?

Every pair of eyes looked at her dumbfounded. She lift her chin and again asked with authority.

Savirti: do u love Maan?

Geet met her eyes and held it confidently: more than anything and anyone, I love Maan.

Suddenly Savirti devi smiled and everyone left a relief sigh. But Ved continued his staring at Geet.

Savirti: I like the girl, she has spine of steel. Atleast your choice is much better than ur father Maan.

Geet again felt confuse and looked at Maan who gave a forceful smile.


Maan: You did what?

Geet looked at him nervously, knowing how much control Maan can sustain. She tried to give an innocent smile but the ticking jaw of Maan vanished her all effort.

Geet: main main wo..

Maan: bakri ki tarha may may karna chodo Geet. Come to the point. U called my mother? How the hell I didn’t notice that?

Geet made a face: u were busy with Mihika hearing her trouble days and Priti maa was calling,

Maan: and u didn’t think it was necessary to call me?

Geet: er… Ummmm aisa hi Kuch.

Maan rolled his eyes in frustration: God help me before I try to kill u Geet u should have give me the phn.

Geet: maa would have dig u half in the ground before u kill me.

Maan: u know u r so irritating.

Geet mumbled half to herself: feeling mutual.

Maan: God Geet how could u tell maa about the situation? Why couldn’t u thinking before opening ur big mouth.

Geet greeted her teeth: Ravan Singh Khurana mind ur language, I m not the owner of a pea size brain like u.

Maan: what?

Geet sighed: see!!!!

Maan: Geet!!!!

Geet: u idiot why will I tell Priti maa when I know nothing? What will I say to her apart from saying where we are staying?

Maan: huh?

Geet nearly growl: u r so frustrating Maan. That’s what I was trying to say, I haven’t said anything to her apart from that Heer is safe in Delhi with Prem and we are staying here with some good persons who helped us, but then she heard dadima’s voice and she suspected something and I hurriedly ended the call. She knew we are in Mumbai and i think she doubted something.

Maan groaned: shit

Geet: but Maan what is this family chain? I m not getting anything apart that ur father married Gauri aunty but then how do u know Ved? Both of ur age diference is only 3-4yrs maybe.

Maan was silent for a moment. But in that silence Geet felt like intruding. So she tried to leave him alone but his strong grip held her firmly then brought her on his lap.

Maan: where do u think u r going?

Geet: I think I should not poke my nose in ur family matter.

She tried to show her small smile but it was so forceful that none need magnifying glass to see her sadness. Maan caresses her cheek then kissed it.

Maan: u r family.

Geet: am I?

Maan nodded: I don’t remember much bcz I was nearly 7yr old when maa left the house with me, Heer was in her womb. Dadi and my father doesn’t know about Heer. Though I doubt he have dug in my file but Heer wasn’t in there, I kept her life private partly because of him.

Geet’s wide eyes made Maan smile, a sad smile that can tore anyone’s heart.

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Kurbaan Tere Ishq Mein Part 35

Part 35

Maan was taking a step towards Ved when he felt a soft hand pressing his palm, he looked at a uncertain Geet. She was confuse and worried for him and with that he saw a reflection of priti on Geet. Immediately memory of his mother’s tear stricken face came down in front of him. Maan stiffened in his position then turned to leave the place but again he couldn’t,, he need to see this… With anger flowing in his vein Maan walked towards Abhi & and Gauri’s room… Geet ran behind him, all of this was leading to disaster. She can feel the rage in his vein.

Maan didn’t knock the door, he just barge the door. The door opened with slam, and with that Gauri jumped in fear. Looking up in his eyes she knew he got to know the truth which she feared till date. Man’s eyes searched something, she knew and hated herself for making him vulnerable. AGAIN…

Maan’s eyes landed on the big photograph of Mr Abhinav Khurana. His jaw was ticking with rage but he couldn’t say anything. His fist tighten in his fist making the knuckle nearly white. 19 yrs. It’s being 19yrs he had seen this man, 19 yrs of hating a person and then one day destiny brought him here. He never wanted this to be like this. He wanted to show the man what he had ditched for what. He wanted to show Mr Abhinav Khurana that they doesn’t need him that the child he so abandon without thinking can win the world with his mother’s blessing and love.. Priti. What will his mother think knowing he is with this man, in his house who so cruelly left them when priti needed him the most.

Gauri: Maan beta.

Maan showed his index finger to shut her up. Bringing his angry gaze from the father he never wanted to meet to Gauri, his father 2nd wife or say first and only love.

Leaving the room Maan walked towards his room, Geet followed him there. She didn’t witness Gauri’s frantical gesture to stop him, her cry of protest, her pain which weirdly bothered Maan. But he shoved everything and started packing.

Geet: Maan what is going on? What r u doing? Where are we going?

Maan: Pack ur stuff. We are leaving.

Geet: but how can we leave now?

Maan skidded his gaze on her and Geet gulped. He was angry, like she had never witnessed. Her gaze steadied on him as she hold his anger in them, but with that she saw something else. Pain, Hurt, Fear.

Shoving every other thought she harden her gaze.

Geet: But we never brought anything how can we leave with all of this which was brought by Gauri aunty.

Maan immediately left everything and held her hand, he didn’t said a word as he started walking towards the main entrance. Geet sighed but without protest held his hand firmly. She can’t leave Maan specially when he is so vulnerable.

They were at the living room when Ved held maan’s hand pleading not to leave. Geet saw the conflict emotions on maan’s face when he tighten his grip on her hand. Ved looked at his sibling who were looking on the verge of tears but stood there unmoved. Gauri whimpered but didn’t said anything.

Ved: u promised bhai u won’t leave me and u broke it, again u r breaking it for the 2nd time.

Maan looked at him then held Geet’s hand close to his heart. Ved looked at Geet with pleading eyes. The strong dark look of Ved replaced as a child who are scared to loose the only support in his life. Geet could have never imagined it even if she tried harder.

Just then the door opened and a tall large man entered the room, maan stood there rigid, the person has the personality that Maan had ever imagined. His 7yrs young mind had it’s own picture though it was young but as powerful as it is now. He is still good looking though a bit plump. Ok a lot plump but the mischievous eyes added the aura to his personality. Maan wanted to hate this man who gave so much pain to his family but somewhere after seeing him 19 yrs that makes a blur. And there stood the 7yrs old boy wanted his parents to hold him, his father to pamper him the way he used to do. Suddenly a tear strain priti’s image flashed against his eyes and he snapped. Hatred that he wanted, came in floods.

Abhinav tried to say something but Maan gesture him to stop. He turned so fast that he didn’t saw the table nearby which crashed against his abdomen wound. Maan cried out with the sudden hit and everyone rushed towards him though he jerked other’s concern touch but couldn’t wipe the fearful concern of Geet who was holding him upright.

Abhi: u can’t leave like this.

Maan greeted his teeth: u should have said that yrs before but u know what, ur opinion doesn’t matter now.

His each word was dripping with hatred as he looked at his father. But then a stren powerful voice caught him offgaurd.

‘His opinion may not matter but does ur dadi also lost her right on her grandson.’

Geet watched an elegant elder lady coming towards them, her eyes never left Maan who seems to forgot everything.

Maan’s eyes took his beloved dadima’s features. She is still so beautiful, his chest swell with the arch of her love, warmth. His mind played the flashes like it has happened yesterday. He recalled the way his dadima used to shower her love on him, how she fulfilled his every little to large demands. Unknowingly Maan left Geet and with difficulties went towards his grandmother who folded him in her arms. Both cried remembering the past the lose they endure all those years.

Dadima was one person who hated the fact her own son destroyed 2 innocent lives, she had cried all those yrs for her daughter in law whom she love more than her own son. Savirti Khurana loved Priti like her own child and after she was gone Savirti devil kicked Abhinav out of that house and he built a new house with his new family, though Savirti devi met her other grand children frequently and kept them uptown date with Maan and Priti’s place in their life by videos and picture but she never set Hr foot in this mansion or forgave Abhi for destroying Priti’s life. She never met her own son in 19yrs. She only came today because of her fav grandson whom she loves the most and waited nearly 2 full decade. And her Son brought her today, her heart was joyful and at the same time clenched with fear, pain, longing to meet her elder grandson which is why came here today…

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Kurbaan Tere Ishq Mein Part 34


Part 34

Seeing Maan’s panicked face Geet touched his arm.

Geet: Huya kya Maan? Why u r behaving like this?

Maan shrugged her touch still roaming his hand in his wild hair. If Geet wasn’t so worried about him she would have thought he looks sexy.

Maan murmured more to himself: I want to stay alone for some time.

He immediately left Geet standing there dumbfounded. She clutched her dress then with a heavy sigh she got dressed fully. Maan was behaving weird but she doesn’t have much time to ponder on it. She will handle Maan later. Looking at the bed she blushed then frowned, worried. God knows who’s room is this but she need to get out of here but not before making the bed.

Geet was silently locking the door when someone jerked her, it clasped her arm in an iron grip. then again she was slumped on the wall and a hard body pressed her nearly cutting out her oxygen. She heard the angry voice. Ved. she nearly cringed hearing the biting word and cursing herself for landing in the devil’s den.

Ved: what the hell do u think u are doing here? Who gave u permission to come here.

He was angry. Hell angry. Geet tried to push him from her but Ved took her both wrist then pinned her on the wall behind her head. Geet looked at him in fear for the 1st time and he lowered his face inches away from her.

Ved: I have asked u something. Tell me damit why are u here.

Geet looked here n there for Maan but he was nowhere. She gulped her fear and tried to recall her marshal act classes. She is good at it. But he was holding her too tight, she have to take old tonic. Before she prepare her knee to hit his groin Ved locked her legs with his. He was fully plastered on her.

Ved: Don’t even think about it. I can unarmed anyone in minute.

The smug smile on Ved’s face wiped away as a hard punch landed on his jaw. It was so forceful that it nearly shook him and landed him a few feet away from Geet still he was still on his feet partly cz he was taking defense classes at a very early age but till now none could take a punch like that on him. He looked at Geet who clinging then his eyes met the most furious eyes he had ever seen. He heard Geet’s whimper and the way she was hugging the man. But Ved couldn’t take away his eyes from the person who looked like his gaze alone can burn the world. He was draped around Geet and hiding her in his arm yet his eyes were on him.

Maan: don’t u fu***** s*** touch a strand of her hair or I will kill u fu***** right now.

It wasn’t an empty threat Ved knew but he couldn’t stop the hope arising in his chest.

Seeing Maan’ vein still ticking to burst on Ved Geet held him closer whimpering softly.

Geet: Maan.

Maan: We are not staying here or I will kill this ba****.

Geet: but

Maan: no…

Ved froze in his track, he didn’t knew who the person Geet came with here. Just catch the last name Khurana. He had barely knew the real story leave his name. For a week he had avoided coming in the house because of this girl who unknowingly stir so many emotion in him he had sworn never to feel. He knew she is the famous lover of the person who was nearly killed to save her though he doesn’t know the meaning of it but seeing him now froze Ved to death. Picture of Maan and Priti Maa that Dadima showed him and his siblings flashed. He still looks same. His heart said he is his Maan Bhai.

Maan was a ticking bomb, he wanted to kill this guy for touching his Geet. He was mad but realizing Geet wasn’t with him, he cursed himself and came back to take her when he heard her whimper and seeing the guy technically crashing her set his blood boiling. He had never seen this guy or heard anything. But he guessed he might be the twin Dev talked about.

Maan was prepare to kill that shit but seeing Geet’s pleading eyes he stopped. He can’t deny the fact a small part of him didn’t wanted that. He couldn’t do that, why? He doesn’t know the answer. He was turning back with Geet when he heard him and froze.

Ved: Maan bhai.

His voice was barely above a whisper but Maan heard it, Geet also maybe. Maan coudln’t take a step then turned to meet the person. He share his eyes, same color, same temper.

Something about him pulled Maan. Maybe the pain and adoration. Why is it here? What the person is to him that he couldn’t even give another punch to the person who touched his Geet.

Ved nearly whimpered: Maan bhai. He took a step then Geet stood between him and Maan stoping the danger to hit her love.

Geet: Stop VED.

The name popped Maan’s every nerve on attention.

Maan: Ved. He took the name so carefully that set Ved to push Geet away and hug Maan who stood dumbfounded. Geet looked at them with wide eyes.

Ved: bhai main Ved, chiku,, don’t u remember me?

His voice was so vulnerable. Like any moment he will break or lose the most precious thing.

Ved: I never let anyone touch your thing. Its still with me. He broke the embrace wiping the lone tear from his lashes. It’s still in the house, our place. Do u remember?

Maan: the Barn.

Maan was still looking at Ved with eyes that void realization but with every word from Ved came the memories. Those childhood days. A  4 yr toddler running behind a 7 yr Maan for his attention.

‘Ved won’t go without Maan bhai’

‘Chiku u know I can’t go to your school. And it your 2nd day baby.’

‘no baby. Ved not baby. Ved big boy.’

‘ then behave like a big boy Chiku. Go to school with dad.’

The toddler’s lips tremble ‘Ved not. Ved stay with Maan Bhai. But Bhai go, not love Ved.’

Maan sighed and wiped the fat tear from the chubby toddler’s cheek.

‘I swear I will be there when u come home. Maan loves you.’


‘promise baba’

Ved: you broke that promise. U left me.

Maan: Chiku I,,,

Emotions clogged maan’s throat as he watched his little brother in so much pain.

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